The Untold Story of he Who Had it Right

March 4, 2013
By BlueCannons3030 GOLD, Alleman, Iowa
BlueCannons3030 GOLD, Alleman, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
God whispers to us in our pleasures, speaks in our consciences, but shouts in our pain. It is his megaphone to rouse a deaf world.
-C.S. Lewis

...Erase my lies

replace my eyes

berate my sighs

embrace my goodbyes

I wish I’d known before the fact
before the door was shut/
I wish I’d saw and understood
the feeling in my gut

Until the very first time
when you kept me in line
I never really cared much about wasting my time
And when you told me to go
guess It just goes to show
I never should have listened, should have stayed with that life

I don’t completely give a rat’s
a** about you now/
I don’t really know or care
what you keep screaming about/
I also don’t quite understand
the rate at which you tried/
it seemed like there were times you cared
and others where you lied


…Erase my lies

replace my eyes

berate my sighs
embrace my goodbyes

And from the very first time
you kept me in line
I always kinda wished that you’d just say goodbye
and now that you know
I guess it just goes to show
You were always wrong, girl, I was already right


...Erase my lies

replace my eyes

berate my sighs

embrace my goodbyes...

The author's comments:
It sounds like its about drugs or whatever, but it isn't

The song itself is about a person being carefree, and not having to worry too much, until somebody comes into his life, and makes him change all that.

You decide which is better.

Erase my lies-If there are trust issues, then get rid of them

Replace my eyes-He's not doing things behind your back, but he does have outside interests.

Berate my sighs-It won't always be easy, give us guys some space.

Embrace my goodbyes-Don't follow those rules, then you obviously don't care enough, and should be happy being alone.

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