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Instrinct

January 30, 2013
By Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
Saintz-Flam3Rose PLATINUM, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
Do not follow those who follow others for they are only followers themselves.


I never get in trouble cause I follow my, instinct, i never get caught cause i follow my, instinct, i never loss a fight when I follow my, instinct,

I don`t depend on nothing, all falls on my instinct, all who don`t end up being extinct, the human species, has become weak, government heads are to big they need an air leak, all they think is money, they forgot and lost their instinct, lost their mind and heart link, all they needs to stop and think..., but they can`t...

I never get in trouble cause I follow my, instinct, i never get caught cause i follow my, instinct, i never loss a fight when I follow my, instinct,... do you follow yours.



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flanny SILVER said...
on Feb. 5 2013 at 6:20 pm
flanny SILVER, Madison, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"You must do the thing you think you cannot do." ~Eleanor Roosevelt

I liked the message of this poem, and I especially liked the last line "do follow yours". I would suggest that you fix some grammatical errors, and also maybe divide it into separate lines. It would make the poem easier to read as well as more powerful


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