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Fire in her eyes

Oh I can feel the cold breeze
Oh I can sense the cruel skies
I can smell the salty tears
She's about to cry,
I can taste the sunsets
I can hear the warning fire
I can see the fire in her eyes
Ready to fight
Waiting for the bloody sight
I see fire in her eyes

Chorus:
Flames that are dancing
Drums that are balsting
Skies sooo unclear
Flames mover, barely any loving,
The FIRE IN HER EYES.
I can see the fire in her eyes!
She seems ready to fight
The coolld war of fright
There's fire in her EYES!
She's...Ready for the 'fight'

Solo:

I can feel the air changing
I can sense the goolden grey skiyes
I can smell the puring rain
I cant taste the sorrowy goodbyes
I can hear the townn shedding a new liight
All cause the girl with fire in her eyes
Burning so BRIGHT
Made up out of fear
She says this is her delight...
THERE'S fire in hereeyyyeess

Chorus:


Chorus:
Flames that are dancing
Drums that are balsting
Skies sooo unclear
Flames mover, barely any loving,
The FIRE IN HER EYES.
I can see the fire in her eyes!
She seems ready to fight
The coolld war of fright
There's fire in her EYES!
She's...Ready for the 'fight'
No lopnger is it bright!!!
The fire in her eeyyees.
Shines strongly inside.

Rap/Fast(attitude):

She's a little strange
She's a little weak
Shes a little different but its a keep
I wouldnt dare touch her
I wouldn't dare seek
I wouldnt dare love by what I see
I can't deny she might decieve
I understand its a possibility
She might have A bit of qualities
She's dangerous
she IS fear
She's the love your afraid to have
She's the singer you want to have
She's the love you will never have
(its still being under construction)




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jetta.ckThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 30, 2012 at 9:50 pm:
Very interesting! Most song lyrics on Teen Ink don't have a rap section like you did; I almost rapped it to myself out loud! This is a very great song, and I can definitely tell how you could think it was near perfection. I would suggest using a little  more poetic effect and your song should sparkle! Fantastic job!
 
SugarLoxezThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Dec. 31, 2012 at 12:00 pm :
Thanks! I'm going to take that in consideration
 
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