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You Make it Hard to Leave

verse 1:
well my eyes, they cannot see
because I'm feeling obsolete
and my mind
is frozen
and when you're laying next to me
do you even feel a thing
or is this just an
illusion

cause when the shadow on the wall tells me the sun is going down
I realize I have seen your face or heard the sound
of your voice
for quite some time
I may seem sad
but oh I'm fine

chorus:
cause I've been thinking lately
I should stop thinking bout you baby
and I know this might sound cliche but without you, I feel crazy
and I'm trying to move on,
telling myself to be strong
but after all the time we spent
its hard to leave with no regrets

verse 2:
well my heart, it cannot beat
when I'm thinking bout the things
that kept us
together
and remembering the times
when you asked me "please be mine, forever"
ha forever

but when I'm laying in my bed wishing I would just fall asleep
I remind myself your words were lies and that they were so cheap so whats the point
of holding on
and after all the times you did me wrong

(chorus)



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jetta.ckThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Dec. 30, 2012 at 9:47 pm:
This is so beautiful! It really is a great piece. The only thing I would have to say is when you say "regrets", it doesn't rhyme and/or cooperate with the existing rhyme scheme. Otherwise, this is fantastic. Great job.
 
hiimveronica replied...
Jan. 7 at 7:38 pm :
it sounds right when its played and sung, more of a slant rhyme , but thanks!
 
jetta.blissThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 8 at 8:20 pm :
I understand. I wish I could hear the music that goes with it; it must be fantastic.
 
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