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She's fighting in the hospital bed
Her hair's gone now, just a vacant head
“Don't cry for me” are her words
Her voice as gentle as a bird's
Never seen a girl so beautiful
Never seen such an angel
She belongs in heaven with the others
Tears slide down the face of her brothers
She's the only one that doesn't cry
How can she accept that she might die?
The color is gone from her pretty face,
But the fire lives in her
Eating away, eating away
Shining through her eyes.
Why does cancer choose the innocent?
Why her? Why not me?
She's gonna sprout wings, fly away
Back to heaven where she should be.
Never seen a girl so powerful
Never seen such an angel.
She held up her white flags, white flags
It's not surrender if the battle isn't fair.
She was fighting, but the fight wasn't enough.
God was calling and it must have been tough.
With the words,
I love you, Mom
I love you, Dad
I love you, everyone I ever had
In the grasp of my little hands, I made you whole
I made you whole
But now I'm going home
With the close of her eyes
She left her spirit, soul, and mind
Never knew a girl so wonderful
Never knew such an angel.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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luvmeforme said...
Nov. 21, 2013 at 3:37 pm
OMG! that is so good im inspired to go day to day now thank you and it was so beautifully written
 
LoveLiv46This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 3 at 1:37 am
Thanks so much! Haven't been on in a very long time as you can see lol
 
Shadowpomgurl said...
Nov. 28, 2012 at 7:34 pm
WOW!!!!! so beautiful! am impressed
 
LoveLiv46This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 3 at 1:36 am
2 years later, but thank you!
 
#hellokittyfan; said...
Nov. 12, 2012 at 10:55 pm
that was  so amazing and creative touching it was just beautiful and i rllly think your an amazing writer;) 
 
LoveLiv46This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Oct. 3 at 1:36 am
Apparently I haven't been on in a while.. thank you!
 
jettabugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Nov. 12, 2012 at 6:58 pm
WOW, this is beautiful. Very insightful, and touching. You're a great writer!!
 
Sportygirl4248This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 12, 2012 at 10:57 pm
Thank you so much. :) I really enjoy your lyrics entitled "Plus More"
 
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