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Was She Worth It?

Acid rain,
couldn't wash away this pain,
I've been blinded,
I've been blinded.

When you walked out the door,
I still crying your name,
knees on the floor,
head hung in shame...

I miss you,
it's like my heart can't beat,
and there's nothing I can do,
but chase you down the street.

And I know you hurt me,
but it feels all the same,
I never thought this would be,
a heart break game.

I stare at the window,
waiting for you again,
even thought I know,
you don't feel my pain.

Was she worth it?
Worth our collected years,
didn't we fit?
Or did you get tired of my tears?

Cause I would change my ways,
become someone new,
would change my days,
if I could only have you.

Was she worth it?
Was she worth it?




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Nov. 3, 2012 at 7:17 pm:
Thanks so much! I'm so very happy that you've commented you've made my day!!!! XD
 
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jettabugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 3, 2012 at 4:41 pm:
That was beautiful! I love how you write. I'll be reading more of your pieces! Keep writing, and good luck on your future writing endeavors!
 
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Nov. 2, 2012 at 6:33 pm:
Thanks so much for reading and commenting! :D Im glad you thought so! :D
 
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ShesAWildflowerThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 2, 2012 at 11:42 am:
This is beautiful. I love the first verse.
 
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