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I fly high, in the sky, my dreams
they shower as dew drops in the dawn,
as the rainfall on a cloudy dusk,
like the sunshine on a summer morn,
as the sweet breeze on a spring eve.

they roar like the thunderstorms,
strike like the lightning,
sparkle like the stars in the night,
dance like the rainbow,
my dreams in the sky, i fly high!!!



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Janelle7This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 19 at 10:38 am:
Beautiful poem! Love the the imagery! Awesome!
 
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LiraDaeris said...
May 25, 2013 at 7:55 pm:
I feel so at ease reading this poem :)
 
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windnguyen96 said...
Feb. 27, 2013 at 5:19 am:
My native language is not English. But when I read your poem, I can see the scene in front of my eyes - has a blue sky, sunshine, light, thunder..I think it is suitable to compare with "Dream".. Dreams always are to do, but when reaching it, we can feel great feelings. Tks for sharing to me!
 
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windnguyen96 said...
Feb. 27, 2013 at 5:19 am:
My native language is not English. But when I read your poem, I can see the scene in front of my eyes - has a blue sky, sunshine, light, thunder..I think it is suitable to compare with "Dream".. Dreams always are to do, but when reaching it, we can feel great feelings. Tks for sharing to me!
 
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Hamzawaseem said...
Jan. 13, 2013 at 3:28 am:
nice work!  
 
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zendaya said...
Oct. 16, 2012 at 4:47 pm:
I love this it is pwoerful and straight to the point
 
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sbetsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 26, 2012 at 5:32 pm:

Nice! I enjoyed reading this.

Please read, rate, and comment on my poems! Thanks!

 
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KanupriyaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 25, 2012 at 8:57 am:
nice imagery...simple and sweet....go, fly high girl! :)
 
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