Never

Never give up on hopes or dreams.
Never stop trying to make them real.
Never listen to the doubts of others.

It's your dream,
they're your hopes,
So you make them real.

Others may say it cant be done,
They may say it's impossible,
Don't listen to those fools.

If you believe it can be done,
If you believe it's possible,
You can make it real,
You can make it true.

Make your dreams,
And make your hopes a reality.
Never,no never,stop trying.

Never give up on hopes or dreams.
Never stop trying to make them real.
Never listen to the doubts of others.

Never.No never ever.
Never stop trying.Trying to make them real.(no no)

No matter what others say,
Never stop trying.





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EmmaClaire0823 said...
Dec. 2, 2013 at 9:30 pm
I really like the topic and the message. It inspires and gives hope. That is always something to write for so good job. The only thing I would say would be to use a wider range of vocabulary like instead of give up say abandon. Keep up the good work.   
 
Peacemakerz said...
Nov. 18, 2013 at 6:42 pm
 I luv this poem! It brings up my hopes, and the repetition really strengthns up the message. Your ppoem can change a life just with a few words that r repeated
 
DedicatedDetermination said...
Aug. 18, 2012 at 8:33 pm
You've managed to get me in a happier mood in less than 15 minutes. I love your spirit and determination!! If I ever get down and uninspired I now know where to look to get me back on the right track.
 
Thoughtsofthewise said...
Jul. 28, 2012 at 9:16 pm

i like this because this is what motivates me to never give up

 

 
nakubara This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 24, 2012 at 10:05 pm
I really like this! Keep up the good work!
 
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