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Why Can't I See You Darling?

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I can feel you right next to me
Your fingers through my hair
Your breath combined with mine
Your warm touch lights up my heart
So why can't I see you darling?
Have I gone blind?
Has my heart closed up?
Or have I gone outta my mind?
Oh baby darling I'd give anything
Just to see you
I keep asking when it will be?
Seeing yourself right next to me
I close my eyes
In hopes of a pleasant surprise
And I can feel you next to me
Your fingers through my hair
Your breath combined with mine
Your warm touch lighting up my soul
So why can't I see you my darling
Oh why can't I see you?
I'd give anything to see your smile
That would keep me going for awhile
I know your here
So why can't I see you?
Sometimes I picture you and me
And how I wish we'd be




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Illuminatus said...
Jun. 21, 2012 at 9:19 pm:
nyc poem and very well versed .. keep em comin ! =)
 
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PurpleOreo said...
Jun. 17, 2012 at 4:59 pm:
Well Written! Keep writting! This would help make a great song. (:
 
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Jun. 17, 2012 at 8:01 pm :
Omg thank you! I shall :)
 
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