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When the Storm begins--
When the Floods deluge--
In His Palm I am--
He is my Refuge;

Always at His Right--
Though grand is my Pain--
He is my Shelter;
With Him I'll remain.





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SaphiraBrightscales This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 30, 2013 at 3:13 pm
Beautifully written. You really have a knack for short poems. You can express so much is few words. Brilliant!
 
Mckay This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 2, 2013 at 3:44 pm
Aww, Thank you. It means the world for me.
 
SaphiraBrightscales This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 3, 2013 at 11:21 am
You're welcome, tough may I ask who you meant by "HE",,, only if you want to that is..
 
Mckay This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 2:28 pm
The "He" in this poem is God. I wrote this for a freind's mom who was going through a rough time in her life. Everything's good now—at least that's what I think. Thanks for asking. 
 
SaphiraBrightscales This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 4, 2013 at 10:55 pm
I did have that impression especially as you capitaled the "H" every time,...I just wanted to make sure... :)))
 
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