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Goodbye

April 5, 2012
By Nickelsond SILVER, Springfield, Illinois
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Nickelsond SILVER, Springfield, Illinois
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"The hero unseen is the word unwritten"

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A spot inside my heart
The heart you tore apart

Forever belongs to you
No matter what you do

Bounce around
Throw me down
Ill stand my ground

Its strange to say
I helps in a way

It keeps us apart
and Protects my heart
from your poisonous dart.

I want to run
but you are my fun

Its like a drug
when we hug

I fall for you
I always do

Thats the time
That you are mine

We have one day
Until I say

Goodbye

The author's comments:
This was a 2 Minute Rhyme trial. You must create a poem in two minutes with a succesful rhyme scheme. The rules state you can have up to two stylistic variations. It is really cool! You should try it! Grab your stop watch and start your "Rhyme Trial."
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pithytothemax GOLD said...
on Apr. 12 2012 at 10:50 pm
pithytothemax GOLD, Calgary, Other
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The fact you wrote this in two minutes was really impressive. I can definitely connect to the brokenheartedness.