For You (in my life)

February 23, 2012
By chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.

Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.

Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.


Breathe for me. Give me Your pain and misery. I want to see your perfect smile. You walk so flawlessly. When you look into my eyes I'm paralyzed. I can't move except to kiss your lips, and that's all right. All I want is you and I. As long as I have that I'm fine. All else in the world just fade to gray. When I hear your angelic voice I know I must make the choice to let go of myself for you. I'll let go of all I have. With you here, it's not so bad. All the smiles that I've forced are now real. Real... like my love for you. All the love I could never let go of... Now, I don't have to. I'd risk my life for you. For you. Anything for yo. I'll give it all to you. As long as I have you in my life... Just as long as I have you.


The author's comments:
I just had an awful breakup and now he wants to be friends... this is what I was thinking when he said what he had to say.

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on Jun. 18 2013 at 12:13 pm
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.

Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.

Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

What?  

on Jun. 18 2013 at 12:13 pm
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.

Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.

Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

thank you. :)

on Oct. 17 2012 at 9:31 pm
Padoodallee GOLD, Haven, Kansas
13 articles 0 photos 120 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I saw the angel in the marble and carved until I set him free." -Michelangelou

Very sweet and simple. I like the forthrightness you put into it.

on Mar. 8 2012 at 9:00 am
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.

Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.

Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

THANKS! Im glad you like it!

on Mar. 8 2012 at 8:59 am
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.

Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.

Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

awwwww thanks!

on Mar. 8 2012 at 8:59 am
chloena_garrett GOLD, Colorado City, Texas
19 articles 13 photos 180 comments

Favorite Quote:
At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet.

Creativity is allowing yourself to make mistakes. Art is knowing which ones to keep.

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.

Art is the only way to run away without leaving home.

Thanks C.K i love your feedback all the time! :D

on Mar. 2 2012 at 8:19 pm
C.K.Snow SILVER, Morden, Other
6 articles 10 photos 73 comments
This is a very good article! I loved the emotion you put into it!

on Mar. 2 2012 at 7:08 pm
bloodroselove SILVER, Spring Mills, Pennsylvania
7 articles 0 photos 33 comments

L.O.V.E IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love the emotion almost brought me to tears

 


on Mar. 2 2012 at 7:07 pm
bloodroselove SILVER, Spring Mills, Pennsylvania
7 articles 0 photos 33 comments
Please keep your comments positive and constructive. We'll remove anything inappropriate. Thanks!

anon12345 said...
on Mar. 2 2012 at 7:02 pm
anon12345, Gys Drive, California
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Favorite Quote:
"If there is a will, there's a way"- Theodore Hertzel

thats really good!!!!!! LOVE IT!!


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