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Almost my friend, almost my boo.
All the moments I almost spent with you.
Almost called, almost text.
Almost good, almost the best.
Almost frowned, almost cried.
Almost kept all my feelings inside.
I was almost yours, you was almost mine.
It was almost there, so was it really time?
When you look, it almost comes down
to almost doesn't almost count.





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Micca_22 said...
Feb. 19, 2012 at 1:15 pm
its not meant to be a song.. its meant to be a POEM .. i just have it up under this category.. but thanks
 
JRsingersongwriter This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 18, 2012 at 3:56 pm
The beginning lyrics are a little cheesy, and the whole thing is repetitive, but I'm sure that's what you were going for. The ending was amazing. This is great as a poem, but I can't picture it as a song. Maybe a tune would help, lol.
 
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