A Bit Cliche.

February 2, 2012
By Marcasaures PLATINUM, Justice, Illinois
Marcasaures PLATINUM, Justice, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Never give up on love, cause when you do find it. It won't give up on you.


What I seem to care about.
Are things that don't matter.
Does these make things even more better?
(I wish I knew)
But all I can worry about is the well being of you.

Do what you wish.
All I care about is that you find your way through.
Do what you must.
Cause in the end I will find it all just.

Say we're all together.
Say we're at peace in our minds.
Don't believe what your heart might tell you.
Believe the thoughts that are in your mind.

Let's not go back and
Wish we could change what has already been done.
Cause as the moon fly's across this night sky.
I wish I find a star that'll lead me to get by

Things will be all better when you're the only one.
My words are done.

Do what is best for you.
I know what you're going through.
Do what is best for you.
(and Everything will be all right)
I know the things you're going through.
and I hope you'll make it through the night

Do what you wish for tonight
I know you'll make it through to see the
sun shine bright
The battle will be won.
As you'll look into the sun and realize,
you've chosen the best for you
and the best for me.

The author's comments:
If I can be honest, it was the downfall of a relationship that started me writing this. I wish it came out of something more positive, but, as I'll quote. "Sweet isn't as sweet without the bitter"

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on Feb. 6 2012 at 4:01 pm
Marcasaures PLATINUM, Justice, Illinois
45 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never give up on love, cause when you do find it. It won't give up on you.

I would love to, and thanks for thoughts about it. Mind linking me to one of yours?

G. said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 6:06 am

G. said...
on Feb. 6 2012 at 6:01 am
Nice progression through the lyrics, I liked the fact that it wasn't one of those break-up songs that are absolutely seeped in depression, and that you are looking to the future and the positive. Well done! (If you find the time, would you have a look at my work?)




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