I Will Not Surrender

January 3, 2012
By ForeverSweetheart GOLD, Safford, Arizona
ForeverSweetheart GOLD, Safford, Arizona
17 articles 1 photo 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Babe, do what you have to do." -- Ryan M.
"I like nonsense; it wakes up the brain cells." -- Dr. Seuss
"Put him in the taffy puller!"
"Taffy puller?!"
"Hey! That was my idea!" -- Charlie and the Chocolate Factory.


I can see you,
Does that mean I surrender?
I can feel you,
Now I'm starting to remember.
These feelings we have inside keep us from falling down.
They keep our feet upon the ground.

How can you do this?
I can't believe I was so wrong.
One minute I'm your best friend.
The next you're stabbing my back.

How can you do this?
For a while I didn't think we'd get through it.
Now I can't sleep at night.

I know they can't hold us down...
I know you can't hold me down.
No, I won't surrender!
I remember what you said to me.

I'll make you regret every tainted memory.
I'll make you forget you could ever love me.

I can see you,
Does that mean I surrender?
I can feel you,
Now I'm starting to remember..



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on Jan. 24 2012 at 11:17 pm
ForeverSweetheart GOLD, Safford, Arizona
17 articles 1 photo 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Babe, do what you have to do." -- Ryan M.
"I like nonsense; it wakes up the brain cells." -- Dr. Seuss
"Put him in the taffy puller!"
"Taffy puller?!"
"Hey! That was my idea!" -- Charlie and the Chocolate Factory.

Thank you! :) I'iv actually redone this a few times. Your comment means a ton.

Kimmai BRONZE said...
on Jan. 24 2012 at 11:15 pm
Kimmai BRONZE, Navarre, Florida
1 article 0 photos 4 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Music is ... A higher revelation than all Wisdom & Philosophy”
― Ludwig van Beethoven

OMG darling, this is soo intense, i like it!

on Jan. 24 2012 at 6:13 pm
ForeverSweetheart GOLD, Safford, Arizona
17 articles 1 photo 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Babe, do what you have to do." -- Ryan M.
"I like nonsense; it wakes up the brain cells." -- Dr. Seuss
"Put him in the taffy puller!"
"Taffy puller?!"
"Hey! That was my idea!" -- Charlie and the Chocolate Factory.

It's a song I'm working on. It's kind of hard to get the music for it though.

on Jan. 24 2012 at 6:11 pm
_ella_herondale BRONZE, San Diego, California
4 articles 2 photos 224 comments

Favorite Quote:
"...If the Thames that ran beside them...recalled a night where the moon shone as brightly as a shilling on the same boy and girl... and thought to themselves, 'at last, the wheel comes full circle,' they kept their silence."

Nice work. what kind of gegnre does it fall under??

on Jan. 24 2012 at 6:09 pm
I REALLY LIKE THIS... AND I CAN RELATE TO WAT U SAYIN.... I REALLY ENJOYED READIN IT.... *NICE WORK*




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