So Dang Perfect

December 17, 2011
Your so dang perfect, and I love you a bunch.
Your so dang perfect, and I hate you so much.
Your so dang perfect, in all that you do.
And I, really hope that you like me,too.

You run so fast, and you jump so high.
You make me joyous and you make me cry.
I turn green with jealousy
But I still love what I see.
Your smart and funny, everything I'm not.
But you are also the only friend I've got.
I'm crush'en on you, but I hate you too.

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guardianofthestars This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Dec. 4, 2012 at 8:41 pm
I liked it! I've always been a sucker for the rhyming poems and this is a super cute one. :)
FreeBeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jun. 4, 2012 at 3:25 pm
I don't know why, but this reminds me of an avril lavigne song! I loved this! great job! :)(:
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