Writer's Block

December 18, 2011
By Ahmad-Mobeen GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
Ahmad-Mobeen GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
11 articles 4 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Understand life... Don't just STAND UNDER it!


The frequent guests no longer knock

those words left me in a shock

with them i used to rock

sky was the limit and i was the hawk

but now, I'm caged in this unbreakable lock

unable to walk, I'm unable to talk

so i sit around staring at that freaking clock

it's like my soul is leaving me, tick by tock

i smile around people, they do not know i mock

please somebody help me, I'm suffering from this writer's block


The author's comments:
So guys I was suffering from writer's block from the past couple of weeks or so. But, it ended today when I wrote this. Please do give feedback! =)

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on Jan. 31 2012 at 2:33 am
Ahmad-Mobeen GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
11 articles 4 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Understand life... Don't just STAND UNDER it!

lol... thanks monkeygirl11! =)

on Jan. 28 2012 at 6:24 pm
Monkeygirl11 BRONZE, Scarborough, Maine
2 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Either write something worth reading or do something worth writing.

- Benjamin Franklin

Nice job! I didn't know there were that many words that rhyme with knock. :)

on Jan. 17 2012 at 11:17 am
Ahmad-Mobeen GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
11 articles 4 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Understand life... Don't just STAND UNDER it!

Ha ha! I understand! =) Thanks anywayz! =D

on Jan. 17 2012 at 10:18 am
Sophie Rose Cope SILVER, Cape Town, Other
7 articles 0 photos 37 comments
the "tick by tock" bit is lovely and very cleverly done. Coming from a family of writers, to say the words "WRITERS BLOCK!" is almost blasphemous, (rather BLIGHTERS ROCK!) but i do know exactly what you mean :)

on Jan. 15 2012 at 11:16 am
Ahmad-Mobeen GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
11 articles 4 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Understand life... Don't just STAND UNDER it!

Thanks LaceeJade =)

LaceeJade GOLD said...
on Jan. 14 2012 at 7:14 pm
LaceeJade GOLD, Bucyrus, Ohio
17 articles 4 photos 136 comments

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♥ I've made mistakes in my life. i've let people take advantage of me, and i accepted way less than i deserve. But, i've learned from my bad choices, and even though there are some things i can never get back and people who will never be sorry. i'll know better next time and i wont settle for anything less than i deserve. ♥

Omg, I feel the exact same it is so aggervating! I absolutly love this! Keep up the good work!

on Jan. 7 2012 at 11:13 am
Ahmad-Mobeen GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
11 articles 4 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Understand life... Don't just STAND UNDER it!

Thanks Andy! =)

on Jan. 6 2012 at 10:45 am
Andy Binker Cosen BRONZE, Buenos Aires, Other
1 article 0 photos 161 comments
Nice! Very well written and quite funny!

on Dec. 25 2011 at 11:58 pm
Ahmad-Mobeen GOLD, Rawalpindi, Other
11 articles 4 photos 60 comments

Favorite Quote:
Understand life... Don't just STAND UNDER it!

Thank you! =) It means a lot!

on Dec. 25 2011 at 11:23 am
Drake-LaShae SILVER, Fremont, Ohio
8 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love me or hate me, both are my favors. If you love me Ill always be in your heart if you hate me, Ill always be on your mind. -William Shakespear

I like it:)


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