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The frequent guests no longer knock

those words left me in a shock

with them i used to rock

sky was the limit and i was the hawk

but now, I'm caged in this unbreakable lock

unable to walk, I'm unable to talk

so i sit around staring at that freaking clock

it's like my soul is leaving me, tick by tock

i smile around people, they do not know i mock

please somebody help me, I'm suffering from this writer's block





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Monkeygirl11 said...
Jan. 28, 2012 at 6:24 pm
Nice job! I didn't know there were that many words that rhyme with knock. :)
 
Ahmad-Mobeen replied...
Jan. 31, 2012 at 2:33 am
lol... thanks monkeygirl11! =)
 
Sophie Rose C. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 10:18 am
the "tick by tock" bit is lovely and very cleverly done. Coming from a family of writers, to say the words "WRITERS BLOCK!" is almost blasphemous, (rather BLIGHTERS ROCK!) but i do know exactly what you mean :)
 
Ahmad-Mobeen replied...
Jan. 17, 2012 at 11:17 am
Ha ha! I understand! =) Thanks anywayz! =D
 
LaceeJade This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 14, 2012 at 7:14 pm
Omg, I feel the exact same it is so aggervating! I absolutly love this! Keep up the good work!
 
Ahmad-Mobeen replied...
Jan. 15, 2012 at 11:16 am
Thanks LaceeJade =)
 
Andy B. said...
Jan. 6, 2012 at 10:45 am
Nice! Very well written and quite funny!
 
Ahmad-Mobeen replied...
Jan. 7, 2012 at 11:13 am
Thanks Andy! =)
 
Drake-LaShae said...
Dec. 25, 2011 at 11:23 am
I like it:)
 
Ahmad-Mobeen replied...
Dec. 25, 2011 at 11:58 pm
Thank you! =) It means a lot!
 
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