Just Gone

Just gone no longer seen
no more words
you promissed me forever
you promised me your love
but now your just gone

The memories are useless
the pain is what will haunt me
your kisses are all bitter sweet
your hugs are just more bruises

Just gone no longer seen
no more words
you promised me forever
you promised me your love
but now your just gone

Every hit knocked me down
it took longer and longer for me to get up
this final blow is what killed me
but you wont care it means nothing but a joke to you

Just gone no longer seen
no more words
you promissed me forever
you promised me your love
but now your just gone





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Future_Worlder said...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 12:51 pm
this is a very deep piece! I really like how u did it
 
poetidea_myworld_22 replied...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 1:18 pm
thank you so much :)
 
Future_Worlder replied...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 1:30 pm
ur very welcome Poet!
 
cookiestar said...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 6:20 am
Wow. I loved it. This is beautiful and emotional :).
 
poetidea_myworld_22 replied...
Jan. 24, 2012 at 1:18 pm
thank you so very much
 
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