Just Gone

December 7, 2011
By poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe


Just gone no longer seen
no more words
you promissed me forever
you promised me your love
but now your just gone

The memories are useless
the pain is what will haunt me
your kisses are all bitter sweet
your hugs are just more bruises

Just gone no longer seen
no more words
you promised me forever
you promised me your love
but now your just gone

Every hit knocked me down
it took longer and longer for me to get up
this final blow is what killed me
but you wont care it means nothing but a joke to you

Just gone no longer seen
no more words
you promissed me forever
you promised me your love
but now your just gone

The author's comments:
this piece is about broken promises and lost love!!!

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on Jan. 24 2012 at 1:30 pm
Future_Worlder PLATINUM, Council Bluffs, Iowa
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Carpe Diem!

ur very welcome Poet!

on Jan. 24 2012 at 1:18 pm
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe

thank you so very much

on Jan. 24 2012 at 1:18 pm
poetidea_myworld_22 PLATINUM, Rediville, South Carolina
39 articles 1 photo 104 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A girl doesn't need anyone who doesn't need her" Marylin Monroe

thank you so much :)

on Jan. 24 2012 at 12:51 pm
Future_Worlder PLATINUM, Council Bluffs, Iowa
22 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Carpe Diem!

this is a very deep piece! I really like how u did it

cookiestar said...
on Jan. 3 2012 at 6:20 am
Wow. I loved it. This is beautiful and emotional :).


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