S.O.S. (Work in Progress)

November 23, 2011
By LukeTheLion BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
LukeTheLion BRONZE, Tucson, Arizona
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I can't fix my problems,
I blew them into mountains,
I dug myself in deep
I can't climb, it's too steep.
I try to wait the storm out,
But my hole is quickly filling
I don't want people to see me
So I'll just keep on drowning

S.O.S., I am a mess,
I have some sins that I must confess,
Promise me, you will be,
the one to watch me beneath the sea,
S.O.S., I regret,
Ever hoping that I had a chance,
Lie To Me, make me believe,
The grass is greener underneath the sea.

The author's comments:
I am just really pessimistic and discouraged as of late, and I thought up some song lyrics. Everything I tagged kinda influenced this, although I don't really mention them, at least not yet.

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on Jan. 17 2012 at 9:13 am
necrophilikat PLATINUM, Greshamville, Georgia
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This is a very beautiful poem.

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