Red lil pieces

November 29, 2011
By P@inLe55 PLATINUM, Poteet, Texas
P@inLe55 PLATINUM, Poteet, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Be your self and have fun, for you only live once

Theres a hole in my heart,
Its been there form the start,
You filled that hole when you said you loved me,
I never thought this is how you'd be,
I never thought you'd lie,
Now i feel like i want to die,
I gave you my heart and you tore it to shreds,
Now its just a river of red,
Red little pieces flowing by,
The little pieces wonder why,
They trusted that you'd care,
They trusted that you'd be there,
Instead you threw them away,
Did you even plan to stay,
When i remember what you said i meant to you,
My blood runs cold because i know its not true,
I gave you my all,
And you threw it away just to savor the fall,
When will you believe its true,
Im now hollow without you...

The author's comments:
I found a few poems from a bad time in my life and just thought id let others know they were from a while ago

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on Dec. 1 2011 at 2:02 pm
Hellokittyninja GOLD, Cannon Falls, Minnesota
13 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are much worse games to play. -the hungar games

That was beautiful and gave me goosebumps. You are a brilliant writer!


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