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If It's a Dream

November 26, 2011
By FreedomWriter2011 BRONZE, Woodbridge, Virginia
FreedomWriter2011 BRONZE, Woodbridge, Virginia
3 articles 3 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living, It\\\'s a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope. Which is what I do, And that enables you to laugh at life's realities." -Dr Seuss


Did my fantasy really come true?
Am I really here with you
I never thought we’d be together
I’ve wanted you since forever
I look into your eyes
And I see something bright
You’re the sun in my life
If it’s a dream please don’t wake me
If it’s a lie please don’t tell me
And even when it rains
You’re the one who gives me my strength
You’re my sun and my moon
You’re the sky that’s blue
You mean the world to me
You’re the one that made me see
I would never forget you
You’re my first true love
You’re the one that made me fly above

If it’s a dream please don’t wake me
If it’s a lie please don’t tell me
If I’m alive I feel amazing
If I died then I’m in paradise
And I can’t believe your mine
I never thought we’d be together
I’ve wanted you since forever
You’re the sun in my life
If it’s a dream please don’t wake me
If it’s a lie please don’t tell me
I love the way you smile, so innocent like a child
And your eyes are always bubbaly
Somehow they always speak to me
You’re totally my opposite
But that’s why were perfect
I guess it’s not a dream
Because I haven’t woken up yet
And I guess it’s not a lie
Because I don’t have regret
Were finally together
We were made for each other

The author's comments:
It's not that great. I wrote it when I was a lot younger, but it is something.

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on Dec. 4 2011 at 9:00 pm
FreedomWriter2011 BRONZE, Woodbridge, Virginia
3 articles 3 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"I like nonsense, it wakes up the brain cells. Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living, It\\\'s a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope. Which is what I do, And that enables you to laugh at life's realities." -Dr Seuss

Thank you so much!

on Nov. 30 2011 at 4:34 pm
Sarbear1995 BRONZE, St. David, Maine
2 articles 0 photos 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Its easier to be wise for others them for our selves"

Wow this was really well written, Great job!! :)