Love Gone Wrong

November 26, 2011
By KityraAnderson PLATINUM, Mercer Island, Washington
KityraAnderson PLATINUM, Mercer Island, Washington
41 articles 1 photo 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing matters more than those who depend on you, emotionally or physically. Even if the situation is life or death, you have to be there for them, because they need you.


We were best friends and you
Said your heart was mine
We said we'd love forever
And we'd be intertwined
But you shattered me
You broke me heart to bits
And I can't take it
(Chorus: You were my first love gone wrong

And you never made it right

You never thought how I'd feel about it

Did you?

You were the best part of me

And then you had to leave me behind

Love gone wrong)
We went our separate ways
But I always look back
Think about all the time we had
You were my heart and soul
I didn't need anyone else but you
You, you, you
(Chorus)
I stayed up that night, swore I'd never love again
But I broke that vow, time and time again
I know that you're my friend
I guess I fell in love with what we had because
(Chorus)
Love Gone Wrong...


The author's comments:
My best friend and I dated...I loved him so much but I guess I fell in love with what we had...He was amazing, and the one person I could rely on, and he ended up leaving me... </3

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on Jan. 13 2012 at 9:36 am
KityraAnderson PLATINUM, Mercer Island, Washington
41 articles 1 photo 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing matters more than those who depend on you, emotionally or physically. Even if the situation is life or death, you have to be there for them, because they need you.

Thank you!!! :D

on Dec. 9 2011 at 9:03 am
KityraAnderson PLATINUM, Mercer Island, Washington
41 articles 1 photo 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing matters more than those who depend on you, emotionally or physically. Even if the situation is life or death, you have to be there for them, because they need you.

Haha, thank you :)

Any advice for me then?


Tiggerlily14 said...
on Dec. 8 2011 at 8:43 pm
sure you are   :)    you have a talent, but you won't be perfect at it right away.  You need to feed it, keep writing, review your things, take advice when it is given.  I can draw fairly well, but I am not awesome at it.  I just drew a picture two days ago, and my dad said today, that when I am ready to except advice, he is willing to give it to me.  My dad has many amazing talents that nhe mixes together for God's glory.  That's what you and I and everybody else need to do with our talents, whether they be big or small, many or few.  :)

on Dec. 8 2011 at 7:43 pm
KityraAnderson PLATINUM, Mercer Island, Washington
41 articles 1 photo 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing matters more than those who depend on you, emotionally or physically. Even if the situation is life or death, you have to be there for them, because they need you.

Oh, thanks :) I don't think I am, though....

Tiggerlily14 said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 9:21 am

:D  good song, and you are a very good writer  :) 

~God Bless


on Dec. 7 2011 at 9:17 am
KityraAnderson PLATINUM, Mercer Island, Washington
41 articles 1 photo 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing matters more than those who depend on you, emotionally or physically. Even if the situation is life or death, you have to be there for them, because they need you.

I never write with a genre in mind...I just pick up the pencil, or sit down in front of my laptop, and go. Some songs, like this one, were written in a split second. Others took days... XD

My favorite by them is Stand In The Rain. I've gone through a lot this year, and this song just really hits on who I am and what I have to do. (Which is, Stand In The Rain... :D )


on Dec. 5 2011 at 4:39 pm
I think he means, "what is your favorite song by them?"....ah well, i just enjoy correcting people  :P  wellllll, I like Superchick too....(oh boy)...but I only know one song  lol  and it is "Stand in the Rain", anyway, yes I am a creep for randomly commenting here, but oh well, it fits me.

on Dec. 5 2011 at 2:44 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

I always write with a genre in mind. It helps me with word choice.  Sometimes I switch genres in the middle of writing the song, or decide to blend genres to better get out the emotions.

And Superchick is awesome.  What is their favorite song by them?


on Dec. 3 2011 at 3:52 pm
KityraAnderson PLATINUM, Mercer Island, Washington
41 articles 1 photo 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing matters more than those who depend on you, emotionally or physically. Even if the situation is life or death, you have to be there for them, because they need you.

Um...well... (OMG I LOVE SUPERCHICK!!) anyways... I have no idea what genre I was going for... I rarely shoot for genres :) Just writing, and yeah...but if you have any ideas, please do tell :)

on Dec. 2 2011 at 2:00 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
12 articles 0 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

I love this...  What genre were you shooting for?  I ask because I see an almost Flyleaf Superchick cross here...

on Nov. 30 2011 at 10:40 pm
KityraAnderson PLATINUM, Mercer Island, Washington
41 articles 1 photo 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing matters more than those who depend on you, emotionally or physically. Even if the situation is life or death, you have to be there for them, because they need you.

Thanks :) I didn't do much, just write what's in my heart. 

on Nov. 30 2011 at 9:36 am
Brokenness_is_Beautiful SILVER, Independece, Louisiana
6 articles 3 photos 77 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is so ironic to understand fully, it takes sadness to know what is happiness. noise to distinguish silent and a broken heart to find true love.

Wow! this is better than any song I've ever written!!! Great job.

on Nov. 29 2011 at 11:37 pm
KityraAnderson PLATINUM, Mercer Island, Washington
41 articles 1 photo 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing matters more than those who depend on you, emotionally or physically. Even if the situation is life or death, you have to be there for them, because they need you.

Haha thanks :)

on Nov. 29 2011 at 11:36 pm
KityraAnderson PLATINUM, Mercer Island, Washington
41 articles 1 photo 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing matters more than those who depend on you, emotionally or physically. Even if the situation is life or death, you have to be there for them, because they need you.

Thank you!! I think everyone whose had a best friend like that should be able to relate to it :)

on Nov. 29 2011 at 10:16 pm
Angel_Writer GOLD, Chillicothe, Ohio
14 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"God didn't take me from you, he only took my hand."

I like it. I can relate to it, it flows together beautifully. It definitely is a good song. 

on Nov. 29 2011 at 7:04 pm
EndlessSilenceOfMidnightDeath PLATINUM, Baker, Florida
20 articles 0 photos 20 comments
I like it. :)

on Nov. 29 2011 at 5:39 pm
KityraAnderson PLATINUM, Mercer Island, Washington
41 articles 1 photo 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing matters more than those who depend on you, emotionally or physically. Even if the situation is life or death, you have to be there for them, because they need you.

Haha, thanks! You should see my friend write, though, her song had me in tears before it even started.

on Nov. 29 2011 at 5:38 pm
sunshine7223 SILVER, Holdenville, Oklahoma
9 articles 0 photos 127 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Afterall, a loose screw doesn't want to need, and a hammer doesn't want to be needed." -Me

"Those who observe with their eyes closed and mouths open, are usually not as wise as those who allow their minds to wander freely." -Me

I enjoyed this. I don't usually care for song lyrics on this site, but yours is super good! :))

on Nov. 29 2011 at 5:28 pm
KityraAnderson PLATINUM, Mercer Island, Washington
41 articles 1 photo 56 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing matters more than those who depend on you, emotionally or physically. Even if the situation is life or death, you have to be there for them, because they need you.

Thanks, samwich! I'm not the best songwriter (no, my friend is) but hopefully not the worst ever either :D

on Nov. 29 2011 at 5:24 pm
samwich7 SILVER, Aquebogue, New York
6 articles 0 photos 70 comments

Favorite Quote:
So when he asks, "You love me. Real or not real?" I say, "Real."
-MOCKINGJAY

I can hear the rhythm in my head... love it.


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