Fallen Petals

November 17, 2011
By Acastillo GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
Acastillo GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
11 articles 0 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just because you have flaws, doesn't mean you aren't beautiful ~Zayn Malik


On the inside I'm hurting like crazy
Our relationship gets more and more hazy
I feel more confused and unsure
And this thing we have is painful to endure

I'm sorry you're a little too late
And I'm tired of being in a miserable
Its just that all of the petals have fallen off my rose
I hate to tell you, but that's the way it goes

I know its hard for me too,
but in the end, we'll make it through

In the beginning it started out perfect, fantastic
Now we are going from solid glass to unsteady plastic
I hesitate to pick up the phone when you call
I'm scared to mess up, I'm scared to fall

I'm sorry, you're a little too late
And I'm tired of being in a miserable state
All of the petals have fallen off my rose
I hate to tell you, but that's the way it goes

I know, its really hard for me too
but in the end, we'll make it through

Things changed and they're not the same
Its not your fault, you're not to blame
I'm sorry that this is the way it goes,
Its just that all of the petals have fallen off my rose.


The author's comments:
The words just flowed out right of me

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on Mar. 6 2012 at 9:16 pm
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars SILVER, Morrisville, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
\"Imperfection is beauty; madness is genius.
and its better to be absolutely ridiculous
than absolutely boring.\"
-Marilyn Monroe

its beautiful!! you're an amazing writer!!

on Jan. 23 2012 at 1:04 pm
RainingInParis1992, London, New York
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Its very nice! :D I really like it :) Keep writing!

on Jan. 22 2012 at 11:07 am
oopsididitagain, Why, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
i go though life like a karate kid

I love it! Very deep!(:

on Jan. 22 2012 at 10:32 am
livelovesmile GOLD, Gaithersburg, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
I am like a star burst. A juicy contradiction. I'm hard to figure out, but when you get to my center, your suprised! It's not what you thought it would be, huh.

awesome! i especially liked the ending

on Jan. 22 2012 at 9:58 am
Simplyjessey BRONZE, Dillonvale, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
Be yourself everyone else is taken.

nice i like it :)

on Jan. 21 2012 at 6:41 pm
Vanilla4Life BRONZE, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never give up on something you can't go a day without thinking about it."
"Being happy doesn't mean everything is perfect. It means you've decided to see beyond the imperfections."

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Shmelmo GOLD said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 12:31 pm
Shmelmo GOLD, Elma, Iowa
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Favorite Quote:
You never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have.

I really like how you tied your feelings into fallen petals of a rose. Very cool perspective!

.king. SILVER said...
on Jan. 21 2012 at 7:16 am
.king. SILVER, Yeux Bien Tres Bien, Other
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( ͡~ ͜ʖ ͡°)

Nice poem here, Acast, I really like it !

on Jan. 8 2012 at 1:44 am
Zinaidia SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
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Favorite Quote:
\\\"Whatever you are, be a good one.\\\"

WOW, THE RHYMING DOES NOT FEEL FORCEFUL AT ALL, AND THE EMOTIONAL SEEMED REAL. BRAVO!

Phoenix. said...
on Jan. 5 2012 at 8:59 am
Phoenix., Pittsfield, Pennsylvania
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I love it great job!

ChaoticBliss said...
on Nov. 30 2011 at 11:05 pm
ChaoticBliss, Las Cruces, New Mexico
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This is a beautiful piece! I really like it. (:

on Nov. 21 2011 at 11:24 am
Paramour13 GOLD, Morris, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
When life leaves us blind, Love keeps us kind.

This is very nice, I enjoyed reading it! keep it up!! :)

Check out my work? :)





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