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Fallen Petals

On the inside I'm hurting like crazy
Our relationship gets more and more hazy
I feel more confused and unsure
And this thing we have is painful to endure

I'm sorry you're a little too late
And I'm tired of being in a miserable
Its just that all of the petals have fallen off my rose
I hate to tell you, but that's the way it goes

I know its hard for me too,
but in the end, we'll make it through

In the beginning it started out perfect, fantastic
Now we are going from solid glass to unsteady plastic
I hesitate to pick up the phone when you call
I'm scared to mess up, I'm scared to fall

I'm sorry, you're a little too late
And I'm tired of being in a miserable state
All of the petals have fallen off my rose
I hate to tell you, but that's the way it goes

I know, its really hard for me too
but in the end, we'll make it through

Things changed and they're not the same
Its not your fault, you're not to blame
I'm sorry that this is the way it goes,
Its just that all of the petals have fallen off my rose.



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AshleaEnchanted said...
Jan. 23, 2012 at 1:04 pm
Its very nice! :D I really like it :) Keep writing!
 
VballGirl143 said...
Jan. 22, 2012 at 11:07 am
I love it! Very deep!(:
 
livelovesmile said...
Jan. 22, 2012 at 10:32 am
awesome! i especially liked the ending
 
shy2012 said...
Jan. 22, 2012 at 9:58 am
nice i like it :)
 
Vanilla4Life said...
Jan. 21, 2012 at 6:41 pm
Like Like Like Like Like Like Like Like Like Like
 
Shmelmo said...
Jan. 21, 2012 at 12:31 pm
I really like how you tied your feelings into fallen petals of a rose. Very cool perspective!
 
Silver2blackThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 21, 2012 at 7:16 am
Nice poem here, Acast, I really like it !
 
Zinaidia said...
Jan. 8, 2012 at 1:44 am
WOW, THE RHYMING DOES NOT FEEL FORCEFUL AT ALL, AND THE EMOTIONAL SEEMED REAL. BRAVO!
 
Jadafunk said...
Jan. 5, 2012 at 8:59 am
I love it great job!
 
ChaoticBliss said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 11:05 pm
This is a beautiful piece! I really like it. (:
 
Paramour13 said...
Nov. 21, 2011 at 11:24 am

This is very nice, I enjoyed reading it! keep it up!! :)

Check out my work? :)

 
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars replied...
Mar. 6, 2012 at 9:16 pm
its beautiful!! you're an amazing writer!!
 
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