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Alone in the Snow


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Slowly swirling snowflakes descending down
They fall and caress the frozen ground,
I watch and smile a simple smile,
Alone in the snow
With nowhere to go;

Without a car, house or home
I am completely alone,
Cold grabbing at my ragged clothes,
Alone in the snow
With nowhere to go;

Friends and family all gone
My strength and warmth won’t last long,
I smile at the frozen forest,
Alone in the snow
With nowhere to go;

I collapse onto the pure white earth
My soul filled with laughter and mirth,
I close my eyes for the last time,
Alone in the snow
With somewhere to go.




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TheSOUNDofSilence said...
Aug. 13, 2012 at 8:25 am:
great imagery! i really like the repeatation.. good job!
 
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SmileyFace13 said...
Nov. 20, 2011 at 9:44 am:

This is really awesome pretty simple but witht the perfectly placed repeatition and the way it flows its beautiful. i have goosebumps :)

 

 
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