When Im thinkin 'bout you

October 13, 2011
By DaniiJaii BRONZE, Oak Park, Michigan
DaniiJaii BRONZE, Oak Park, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
If you dont have haters, then your doing something wrong .

When I’m thinking ‘bout you.

A tornado flew around my room
before you came
Excuse the mess it made,
it usually doesn't rain
In Southern California,
much like Arizona
My eyes don't shed tears,
but boy, they blow
When I'm thinkin' 'bout you

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on Oct. 18 2011 at 1:11 pm
Natasha1994 SILVER, Arizona City, Arizona
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I think your poem is telling that you and someone broke up and you miss him. Thats what i am getting from this poem


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