the soul

September 27, 2011
By MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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when you look at me?
what do you see?
I am the color black
a soul is what lack
so the shadows find me
the lock to my heart
which has no key
when i am alone
such agony makes me moan

looking at me
what do you see
if only i could be free


The author's comments:
i am inspired by my heart

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on Feb. 10 2012 at 3:26 pm
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Music is my religion, Magic is my kingdom, The dancefloor is my heavan"
-by. Blood On The Dance Floor

Well all i can really suggest is tht u continue to write and one day u will realize u can write almost anything, I too began writting only poetry then i started experimenting and trying to write stories then i soon realized i was a good writer. but dont lose hope, keep trying

mrsensetive said...
on Feb. 8 2012 at 3:06 pm
im not only good at poetry ;)

on Feb. 8 2012 at 2:52 pm
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
21 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Music is my religion, Magic is my kingdom, The dancefloor is my heavan"
-by. Blood On The Dance Floor

i bet u r good at writting but u just dont know it yet :)

on Feb. 7 2012 at 10:53 am
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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im not that funny

on Feb. 6 2012 at 10:55 am
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments
thank you it means alot

on Feb. 6 2012 at 10:55 am
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments
hi im not that good at poetry

on Jan. 3 2012 at 10:05 am
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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wow you are really good you should keep writing definitly

on Dec. 29 2011 at 2:24 am
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

;> .............

on Dec. 29 2011 at 2:06 am
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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I am funny lol

on Dec. 29 2011 at 1:00 am
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

0.0 ur funny ;)

on Dec. 26 2011 at 3:50 pm
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
21 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Music is my religion, Magic is my kingdom, The dancefloor is my heavan"
-by. Blood On The Dance Floor

thx tht means a lot to me.

on Dec. 26 2011 at 3:47 pm
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments
lol ok ill read

on Dec. 26 2011 at 3:38 pm
EmoAngel18 PLATINUM, Williamsport, Pennsylvania
21 articles 1 photo 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Music is my religion, Magic is my kingdom, The dancefloor is my heavan"
-by. Blood On The Dance Floor

lol this poem is really good. i wrote a poem like this a few days ago but i havent had time to post it on my page.

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on Dec. 26 2011 at 1:02 pm
izyfizy GOLD, Alameda, California
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Favorite Quote:
You all laugh because I'm different,
I laugh because you're all the same.
- Anonymous

*high fives* niiiiccceeeeee!!! i like it! ALOT! see! you ARE a FANTASTIC writer, AND poet... :D

on Dec. 26 2011 at 4:23 am
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
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ok thank you cutie

A.A Siyal said...
on Dec. 26 2011 at 4:20 am
Fabulous... u know the art of writing... inspired! :)

on Dec. 26 2011 at 12:23 am
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments
only for food

on Dec. 26 2011 at 12:11 am
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

they also kill

on Dec. 26 2011 at 12:10 am
MrsensitiveE GOLD, Apple Valley, California
11 articles 0 photos 40 comments
wolves mate for life lol

on Dec. 26 2011 at 12:07 am
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

-glares evily like a hungry wolf- ya..dead!! LOL


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