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when you look at me?
what do you see?
I am the color black
a soul is what lack
so the shadows find me
the lock to my heart
which has no key
when i am alone
such agony makes me moan

looking at me
what do you see
if only i could be free




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EmoAngel18 said...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 3:38 pm:
lol this poem is really good. i wrote a poem like this a few days ago but i havent had time to post it on my page.
 
mrsenesitive replied...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 3:47 pm :
lol ok ill read
 
EmoAngel18 replied...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 3:50 pm :
thx tht means a lot to me.
 
mrsenesitive replied...
Jan. 3, 2012 at 10:05 am :
wow you are really good you should keep writing definitly
 
mrsenesitive replied...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 10:55 am :
hi im not that good at poetry
 
EmoAngel18 replied...
Feb. 8, 2012 at 2:52 pm :
i bet u r good at writting but u just dont know it yet :)
 
mrsensetive replied...
Feb. 8, 2012 at 3:06 pm :
im not only good at poetry ;)
 
EmoAngel18 replied...
Feb. 10, 2012 at 3:26 pm :
Well all i can really suggest is tht u continue to write and one day u will realize u can write almost anything, I too began writting only poetry then i started experimenting and trying to write stories then i soon realized i was a good writer. but dont lose hope, keep trying
 
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izyfizy said...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 1:02 pm:
*high fives* niiiiccceeeeee!!! i like it! ALOT! see! you ARE a FANTASTIC writer, AND poet... :D
 
mrsenesitive replied...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 10:55 am :
thank you it means alot
 
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mrsenesitive said...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 3:51 pm:
hihihihihihihihihihihi
 
A.A Siyal replied...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 4:20 am :
Fabulous... u know the art of writing... inspired! :)
 
mrsenesitive replied...
Dec. 26, 2011 at 4:23 am :
ok thank you cutie
 
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BreakingBrooke said...
Dec. 7, 2011 at 8:04 pm:
oh goodness mrsensetive this is amazing. its exactly how i feel and i love how such little words can mean so much.
 
mrsenesitive replied...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 10:06 am :

thank you i dont think im very good

 

 
BreakingBrooke replied...
Dec. 8, 2011 at 5:30 pm :
huh? why not? u definetly are.
 
mrsensitive replied...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 8:57 am :
and you are definitly a cutie
 
BreakingBrooke replied...
Dec. 9, 2011 at 5:26 pm :
haha thx :) but seriously when you say "the lock to my heart has no key" i wanted to scream (in joy) because thats kinda been a topic on my mind lately. the key isnt lost, there just never was one to begin with. keep writing. id love to read more :)
 
mrsensitive replied...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 8:51 am :
i plan to write forever and ever am i cute
 
DrowningInTheBrooke replied...
Dec. 12, 2011 at 5:41 pm :
thats good that u plan on writing forever. as for how u look, its a random question and ur pic is crappy quality. so..sorry? but i cant tell
 
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