The Unanswered

September 30, 2011
By ColleenP BRONZE, Bethlehem, Pennsylvania
ColleenP BRONZE, Bethlehem, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
ill decide when i hear it


What makes a liar tell the truth
What makes a honest man cheat
What makes me love you
What makes you believe ill forgive you so easily

Yes you were wrong
Yes I am hurt inside
Yes this pain will overcome
Yes it will take time

No I don’t feel the same about you anymore
No there is nothing you can say to change my mind
No anything you do won’t make me comfortable
No I don’t show my pain on the outside

Why did things have to be this way
Why can’t I smile when I see your face
Why can’t everything that happened be erased
Why can’t you just love me and make me feel safe

The author's comments:
just what i was thinking about one day

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on Nov. 15 2011 at 2:22 pm
ColleenP BRONZE, Bethlehem, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
ill decide when i hear it

thank you (: and it could be either i have had a guy sing it and play piano to it and it was pretty awesome 

on Oct. 7 2011 at 6:48 pm
BrokenThorn BRONZE, Blenheim, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"You've lived your life Like a candle in the wind. Not knowing who to cling to when the rain set in"
- Sir Elton John

I do like this, but is it more of a short poem than a song? you could easily add to this to make it into a really good song :)


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