You Beat My Soul & Shot Me Down

August 30, 2011
By TubaLady DIAMOND, Athens, Michigan
TubaLady DIAMOND, Athens, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"I know how it feels to be completely alone and helpless, and the last thing you want to hear in that situation is, 'It's going to be OK. ' The only thing that seems to really help is that someone else who has felt that low expressing those feelings"


You beat my soul & shot me down
Made me feel I wasn't good enough
I still hurt to this day

the pain is still tough
Should I take my life?
And resist the pain I endear
What do I do!?

help me my dear


The author's comments:
I wrote this when I was thinking back on the time when smoeone, who I believed to be my friend, turned around and threw something I love and care about deeply in my face. They did this repeatedly to the point I wanted to curl up and disappear.

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on Nov. 15 2011 at 8:34 am
TubaLady DIAMOND, Athens, Michigan
89 articles 2 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know how it feels to be completely alone and helpless, and the last thing you want to hear in that situation is, 'It's going to be OK. ' The only thing that seems to really help is that someone else who has felt that low expressing those feelings"

Thanks, you're REALLY nice! :)

on Nov. 13 2011 at 11:30 am
clumsyteardropper SILVER, Roslyn, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"You can't help others, if you yourself need help" -my sister ;) love it!

yeah, same here... every time I tell them how i feel right to THEIR faces, they get mad and all that... so all I can do is write about it.  so i get what you mean by this is the only way you can vent.
this was so well done.  you're a great writer.  I'm sorry that this person did this to you, I understand how you feel.

on Nov. 12 2011 at 3:29 pm
TubaLady DIAMOND, Athens, Michigan
89 articles 2 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know how it feels to be completely alone and helpless, and the last thing you want to hear in that situation is, 'It's going to be OK. ' The only thing that seems to really help is that someone else who has felt that low expressing those feelings"

Thank you. I was constantly harrassed by this person and felt so depressed. I vent through writing, the words just seem to flow. I had a friend ask me how I can write so easily. :)

on Nov. 12 2011 at 3:28 pm
TubaLady DIAMOND, Athens, Michigan
89 articles 2 photos 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I know how it feels to be completely alone and helpless, and the last thing you want to hear in that situation is, 'It's going to be OK. ' The only thing that seems to really help is that someone else who has felt that low expressing those feelings"

Thank you.

on Sep. 14 2011 at 7:09 pm
Dark_Secrets BRONZE, Houston, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Maybe one day we'll wake up, and this will all just be a dream." ~Eminem

Wow. I've felt exactly like that. I couldnt never find the right words but you took this to a whole new level. i loved it

tevoRocks said...
on Sep. 14 2011 at 5:26 pm
 the best poem ever how did you think of it


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