You Beat My Soul & Shot Me Down

You beat my soul & shot me down
Made me feel I wasn't good enough
I still hurt to this day

the pain is still tough
Should I take my life?
And resist the pain I endear
What do I do!?

help me my dear





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Dark_Secrets said...
Sept. 14, 2011 at 7:09 pm
Wow. I've felt exactly like that. I couldnt never find the right words but you took this to a whole new level. i loved it
 
TubaLady This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 3:28 pm
Thank you.
 
tevoRocks said...
Sept. 14, 2011 at 5:26 pm
 the best poem ever how did you think of it
 
TubaLady This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 12, 2011 at 3:29 pm
Thank you. I was constantly harrassed by this person and felt so depressed. I vent through writing, the words just seem to flow. I had a friend ask me how I can write so easily. :)
 
clumsyteardropper replied...
Nov. 13, 2011 at 11:30 am
yeah, same here... every time I tell them how i feel right to THEIR faces, they get mad and all that... so all I can do is write about it.  so i get what you mean by this is the only way you can vent.
this was so well done.  you're a great writer.  I'm sorry that this person did this to you, I understand how you feel.
 
TubaLady This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Nov. 15, 2011 at 8:34 am
Thanks, you're REALLY nice! :)
 
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