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2 a.m. and his smile, his laugh, dance tauntingly across my memories
I wake up crying, wake up trying…to breathe, to fight


Thoughts of him replaying,
I know I am delaying…
To let him go… at least in my mind.
A broken heart is so sobering.

But when I looked in his eyes,
I didn’t see mine.
I saw every lie, every girl, every Friday night.
He had me fall in love, and then he buried me alive.
I guess you’re just a boy, not the man I thought you were inside…
Another breaking lie… I was forgotten on the sideline.

Falling apart, crashing to pieces….
Is this a nightmare…or is it my lesson?
Everything we had has hit the wall, he broke it all.
What we were and used to be… isn’t ours at all.
I’m addicted to his toxic heart, crave it like a sin.
The thin line we walked was cut; I know where he’s been.
I said goodbye, but I can’t let go… why can’t I be stronger?
This song is my plea to hold on just three minutes longer…
He’s in my brain, in my heart, and under my skin….
Give me something to get rid of him…
I’ve got a reason to bury this alive…
All these unraveling lies.


Don’t tell me you love me…not anymore.
I’m not the same naive little girl next door.

Don’t you dare break my heart and try to put it back together, too.
Cause I can’t function with or without you.

I don’t know if I’ll be alright, I can’t pretend that I’m just fine.

Pouring outside, but it’s my tears rolling down the window pane
The raindrops are fallin’ down my face…
You had it all… and I still can’t believe you just threw me away


CHORUS

You are my permission to sin…
you might’ve started my reckoning,
I now have a reason to bury him alive…
From every pain to every crime...
All these unraveling lies...

My heart believes…you didn’t try.
I do believe… You never even cried.
But I do blame you for every time.
I do blame you for every lie.
When I look in your eyes…I don’t see mine.

CHORUS

All these unraveling...lies.



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shadow_girl13 said...
today at 9:59 am:
I dont know what to say but AMAZING! You are so good at rhyming. I made a song called Lake of tears, Ill soon put it up, hope you can check it out. GREAT!
 
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mythoughtsonpaper said...
Mar. 29, 2012 at 12:12 pm:
You're such an amazing writer, everything you write is outstanding!!
 
amanda727 replied...
Jan. 20, 2013 at 4:28 pm :
Aww, thank you so much! I really do appreciate it! :)
 
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Acts1338This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 9, 2012 at 1:12 pm:
I really love this! It goes together well and reminds me of a lot of things that aren't always easy to put on paper...It's truly amazing :)
 
amanda727 replied...
Jan. 20, 2013 at 4:30 pm :
Thank you so much! I try to write in the exact moments of trials and pain, so I'm as honest as possible. I try not to edit my poetry and songs because...that's how I felt in that moment. Thank you for your kind words! I am glad you enjoyed it! :)
 
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isimplywish said...
Dec. 19, 2011 at 12:45 am:
This is truly stunning. I can definitely imagine hearing this song on the radio. These lyrics are amazing, love it to pieces :) and it's now stuck in my head haha
 
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RoseOzera said...
Nov. 25, 2011 at 9:32 pm:
This is basically the most fantastic thing I have ever read. Somebody, please, pass the tissues. :')
 
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can_you_keep_a_secret said...
Oct. 25, 2011 at 4:54 pm:
I can't really explain to you how much i relate to this. You are truly great at writing, and i know it because i cried when i read this. i appreciate this peice so much and honestly just love you for it<3 Thank you.
 
amanda727 replied...
Jan. 20, 2013 at 4:31 pm :
Thank you! Awww. :) I loved this comment. Well, I'm glad... I try to be as real as possible in my writings, and inspire or relate to someone feeling the same way.
 
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RandomRanda said...
Oct. 18, 2011 at 8:47 am:
have a great talent!!!! so keep it up!!!!
 
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LostinLove<3 said...
Sept. 30, 2011 at 9:43 pm:
i love these lyrics.!! :)you're very talented.!
 
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