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Feel Like Winter

i talk like winter and fall like rain,
life these days on my window pain,
what have i got left without you here,
frozen eyes with no more tears,
days feel like years and nights so old,
what have i got left besides my home,
for my home is your heart when were alone



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Aderes18This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 5:33 pm:

Depressing. Not a big fan of it. Sorry! 

The first line sounds like a riddle. :)

 
savetheplanetThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Aug. 20, 2011 at 8:36 pm :
Hmm, so very lonely.  But good.  It's a good start, I'm sure your poems will improve. :)
 
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