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Feel Like Winter

August 3, 2011
By Christian.A.Piper-777 PLATINUM, Decatur, Michigan
Christian.A.Piper-777 PLATINUM, Decatur, Michigan
28 articles 0 photos 57 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What you make of today comes with you for the rest of your life"


i talk like winter and fall like rain,
life these days on my window pain,
what have i got left without you here,
frozen eyes with no more tears,
days feel like years and nights so old,
what have i got left besides my home,
for my home is your heart when were alone


The author's comments:
Life feels bad when nobody is around

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on Aug. 20 2011 at 8:36 pm
savetheplanet PLATINUM, Anaheim, California
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Favorite Quote:
It is better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all.

Hmm, so very lonely.  But good.  It's a good start, I'm sure your poems will improve. :)

Aderes47 GOLD said...
on Aug. 20 2011 at 5:33 pm
Aderes47 GOLD, Cambridge, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
You will find as you look back upon your life that the moments when you have truly lived are the moments when you have done things in the spirit of love.
Henry Drummond

Depressing. Not a big fan of it. Sorry! 

The first line sounds like a riddle. :)