Love Lost

August 10, 2011
By Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant
Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall
Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me


I loved and i lost
I put my heart out and was dropped
Like a stone to the ground
Who thought it was sky bound

Now i sit and i wait
On my unmistakeable fate
Were you my one and only
Or just another phony

You hurt me in a way
That is not known by many
But when it is known
The pain is a plenty

I hope your next lust
Is a cheat and a liar
So you will feel like i did
When you threw me into the fire



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on Sep. 12 2012 at 8:06 pm
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant
Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall
Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me

Ikr! Lol apply cold water to burns :p

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on Aug. 21 2012 at 8:42 pm
Hannabug GOLD, Winona, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the Divine." Ludwig van Beethoven

the last line is like ,"ooohhhh buuurrrrnnnn."  But it's a good poem :D

on Jun. 16 2012 at 9:41 pm
TMarie42 SILVER, Orland, California
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Favorite Quote:
Pulvis et umbra sumus.

LOVE the last stanza! I can easily relate!

on Jun. 16 2012 at 9:18 pm
Ms.PeytonLovesHP GOLD, Rancho Cordova, California
18 articles 0 photos 184 comments

Favorite Quote:
“We are all a little weird and life is a little weird, and when we find someone whose weirdness is compatible with ours, we join up with them and fall in mutual weirdness and call it love.” - Doctor Seuss

I can totally relate to this. These feeling ssuck, i knwo. really good

 


on May. 6 2012 at 3:42 pm
RebeccaMey SILVER, Poughkeepsie, New York
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Favorite Quote:
If you love it let it go. If it comes back to you its yours to keep.

This is really good! I like the rhyming scheme.

on Nov. 29 2011 at 7:41 pm
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant
Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall
Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me

haha...odd...but i think i understand :p

on Nov. 28 2011 at 5:56 pm
Mortimer-Micheals-Jacob-Joyce GOLD, Edgar, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
"And when I'm gone, just carry on, don't mourn
Rejoice every time you hear the sound of my voice
Just know that I'm looking down on you smiling
And I didn't feel a thing, So baby don't feel my pain
Just smile back"-Eminem

This is good.  After reading this, I had the sudden urge to quote Darth Vader.

on Nov. 28 2011 at 5:54 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
32 articles 1 photo 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It." ~some book that i don't remember the name of

"Live Life Like There's No Yesterday" ~ random billboard

"If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You" ` ~ Kerli?

wow this is very strong. i love it. i love many things about it. ur very talented :) maybe u could read mine? 

on Aug. 25 2011 at 3:51 pm
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant
Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall
Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me

Thanks! I'll be sure to read yours when i get a chance.

on Aug. 24 2011 at 6:01 pm
taterbug235 SILVER, Flora, Indiana
5 articles 0 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never underestimate the impossible.

wow!!!! i love this poem. you are rly talented! im also just starting i hope people will read mine:)

on Aug. 24 2011 at 4:01 pm
AmandaElizabeth PLATINUM, Fulton, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"Believe that life is worth living and your belief will help create the fact."

Anytime. I'm just starting out too. And I agree. :)

on Aug. 24 2011 at 11:36 am
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant
Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall
Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me

Thanks :). Im just starting out and this was probably one of my best.

on Aug. 23 2011 at 4:25 pm
AmandaElizabeth PLATINUM, Fulton, Kentucky
48 articles 0 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Believe that life is worth living and your belief will help create the fact."

This is actually pretty good. XD


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