Love Lost

August 10, 2011
I loved and i lost
I put my heart out and was dropped
Like a stone to the ground
Who thought it was sky bound

Now i sit and i wait
On my unmistakeable fate
Were you my one and only
Or just another phony

You hurt me in a way
That is not known by many
But when it is known
The pain is a plenty

I hope your next lust
Is a cheat and a liar
So you will feel like i did
When you threw me into the fire

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Hannabug said...
Aug. 21, 2012 at 8:42 pm
the last line is like ,"ooohhhh buuurrrrnnnn."  But it's a good poem :D
Mr.Indescribable replied...
Sept. 12, 2012 at 8:06 pm
Ikr! Lol apply cold water to burns :p
TMarie42 said...
Jun. 16, 2012 at 9:41 pm
LOVE the last stanza! I can easily relate!
HarryPotterLover30 said...
Jun. 16, 2012 at 9:18 pm

I can totally relate to this. These feeling ssuck, i knwo. really good


RebeccaMey said...
May 6, 2012 at 3:42 pm
This is really good! I like the rhyming scheme.
FlaviusJacobiusOssummuss said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 5:56 pm
This is good.  After reading this, I had the sudden urge to quote Darth Vader.
Mr.Indescribable replied...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 7:41 pm
haha...odd...but i think i understand :p
BeyondTheBrooke said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 5:54 pm
wow this is very strong. i love it. i love many things about it. ur very talented :) maybe u could read mine? 
poetrywiz35 said...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 6:01 pm
wow!!!! i love this poem. you are rly talented! im also just starting i hope people will read mine:)
CarolinaBoy23 replied...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 3:51 pm
Thanks! I'll be sure to read yours when i get a chance.
AmandaElizabeth said...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 4:01 pm
Anytime. I'm just starting out too. And I agree. :)
AmandaElizabeth said...
Aug. 23, 2011 at 4:25 pm
This is actually pretty good. XD
CarolinaBoy23 replied...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 11:36 am
Thanks :). Im just starting out and this was probably one of my best.
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