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Love Lost

I loved and i lost
I put my heart out and was dropped
Like a stone to the ground
Who thought it was sky bound

Now i sit and i wait
On my unmistakeable fate
Were you my one and only
Or just another phony

You hurt me in a way
That is not known by many
But when it is known
The pain is a plenty

I hope your next lust
Is a cheat and a liar
So you will feel like i did
When you threw me into the fire



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HannabugThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 21, 2012 at 8:42 pm:
the last line is like ,"ooohhhh buuurrrrnnnn."  But it's a good poem :D
 
Mr.Indescribable replied...
Sept. 12, 2012 at 8:06 pm :
Ikr! Lol apply cold water to burns :p
 
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TMarie42 said...
Jun. 16, 2012 at 9:41 pm:
LOVE the last stanza! I can easily relate!
 
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HarryPotterLover30 said...
Jun. 16, 2012 at 9:18 pm:

I can totally relate to this. These feeling ssuck, i knwo. really good

 

 
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RebeccaMey said...
May 6, 2012 at 3:42 pm:
This is really good! I like the rhyming scheme.
 
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FlaviusJacobiusOssummuss said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 5:56 pm:
This is good.  After reading this, I had the sudden urge to quote Darth Vader.
 
Mr.Indescribable replied...
Nov. 29, 2011 at 7:41 pm :
haha...odd...but i think i understand :p
 
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BeyondTheBrooke said...
Nov. 28, 2011 at 5:54 pm:
wow this is very strong. i love it. i love many things about it. ur very talented :) maybe u could read mine? 
 
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poetrywiz35 said...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 6:01 pm:
wow!!!! i love this poem. you are rly talented! im also just starting i hope people will read mine:)
 
CarolinaBoy23 replied...
Aug. 25, 2011 at 3:51 pm :
Thanks! I'll be sure to read yours when i get a chance.
 
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AmandaElizabeth said...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 4:01 pm:
Anytime. I'm just starting out too. And I agree. :)
 
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AmandaElizabeth said...
Aug. 23, 2011 at 4:25 pm:
This is actually pretty good. XD
 
CarolinaBoy23 replied...
Aug. 24, 2011 at 11:36 am :
Thanks :). Im just starting out and this was probably one of my best.
 
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