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Dear Mommy

I loved the way you tickled my feet and read to me till' I fell asleep. You kissed my head and made my bed and made sure I was all ways well fed. You gave me advice, made sure I was nice and when I was wrong you made me think twice. You all ways would try and you never did lie but some way some how I never did say goodbye.



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thetruthawaits94 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 21, 2011 at 1:06 pm:
this has great feeling in it! I think you did a wonderful job! :) may i ask, why do you format all of your poems in this way (like in a paragraph)?
 
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JerseyGirl716 said...
Aug. 21, 2011 at 11:04 am:
I can feel your pain in your words; great job!
 
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IndiewriterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 14, 2011 at 8:28 pm:
good job conveying emotion)= 
 
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kaykaybeck said...
Aug. 12, 2011 at 5:35 pm:
Aww :( really good job
 
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