She Meant Goodbye

July 19, 2011
By Emily.L GOLD, Gilbert, Arizona
Emily.L GOLD, Gilbert, Arizona
10 articles 12 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes, we just have to be happy with what people can offer us. Even if it's not what we want, at least it's something. " -Sarah Dessen


See that high-heeled silhouette?
She's the queen of everything.
She's the one that stole your heart
And took you to L.A.
Yeah, she's the one that causes casualties.

[Chorus]
I'm not perfect,
I can't stop this.
I can't wear those boots
And stomp on your break-up lines.
Can you hear me
Crying for you,
Locked in my bedroom
While she claims she loves you too?

See that smirking profile?
She's the queen of wanting more.
She's the one that takes the guys
And cheats on everyone.
Yeah, she's the one that causes falling tears.

[Chorus]

See those cold, blue, icy eyes?
She's the queen of cutting ties.
She's the one that cared for you,
But only pretended.
Yeah, she's the one that causes betrayals.

[Chorus]

I wish you were bright enough,
I wish you could see
The way she manipulates,
And tears your mind
Out of its place.

Now that she's made her mark,
I couldn't take you back.
Not even if you tried.

[Chorus]


The author's comments:
This didn't start off as a song, but as I had a little acoustic melody playing in my head as I wrote, so I created verses, a chorus, and a bridge. Enjoy!

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on Aug. 10 2011 at 4:54 pm
JoPepper PLATINUM, Annandale, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Freedom is the ability to not care what the other person thinks."

"Not all those who wander are lost" --JRR Tolkien

"When you are listening to music it is better to cover your eyes than your ears." --Jose' Bergamin

A-M-A-Z-I-N-G I love it!!!! don't EVER stop writing!!!!!! :D

gigi01 GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 11:03 am
gigi01 GOLD, Seffner, Florida
17 articles 0 photos 64 comments
This is so good... I like how it starts with stilettos! But, true story... 

OceanFey GOLD said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 10:43 am
OceanFey GOLD, North Potomac, Maryland
12 articles 1 photo 36 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is easy to hate and it is difficult to love. This is how the whole scheme of things works. All good things are difficult to achieve; and bad things are very easy to get. - Confucius

Wow I can't wait to hear the song! :D the lyrics are so awesome. I love the beginning especially.

.Izzy. BRONZE said...
on Jul. 22 2011 at 10:05 am
.Izzy. BRONZE, Broadview Heights, Ohio
1 article 0 photos 388 comments
Great song, as DaylightDarkness said I could see it as both a song and a poem. The message was good and sadly relatable to many.

on Jul. 21 2011 at 11:15 pm
DaylightDarkness SILVER, Littleton, Colorado
9 articles 0 photos 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
Everyone's crazy. You know why? We all want to be normal. Well, we cant define normal, and, the people you can point at and say, well isn't he/she normal are rare. Doesnt that kind of defeat the pupose of normal? -My Friend

This is really good, and I can see it as both a poem and a song, which, in my opinion, are the best songs anyway. ^^. I didn't hear the acoustic, but i hear someone singing it, so wow! Great job.

on Jul. 21 2011 at 8:46 pm
TwasBrilling BRONZE, Staunton, Va, Virginia
4 articles 0 photos 79 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The owl of Minerva spreads its wings only with the falling of the dusk" -H.W. Hegel

"Words are our most inexhaustable source of magic' -Albus Dumbledore

I usually don't like song lyrics, but I really likied this. It has a good message...one that alot of peope can relate to!

on Jul. 21 2011 at 5:56 pm
bookworm29 PLATINUM, Rockville, Maryland
28 articles 2 photos 61 comments

Hmm... your Queen of Everything reminds me of someone I know...She irritates me a lot. Your a good song writer.

 



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