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If only life were as peaceful and beautiful as a meadow.
As calm as the warm wind in June but as pure as the white snows of December.
As harmonious as a choir of soprano and tenor singers accompanied by flutes, clarinets, violins and piano.

Peace and harmony would make existence more pleasurable, more enjoyable.
But if life were meant to be perfect there would not be heaven nor hell.
There would not be bad or good and there would not be right nor wrong.



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Lexie96 said...
Nov. 6, 2011 at 4:37 pm

I like it but at the end I think it might have read better with an or instead of nor... good content and ideas though... 4/5- solid.

Check out my work sometime?

 
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Nov. 7, 2011 at 12:20 am
alright, i will Lexi96. Thanks for the comment and critizism.
 
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