Hello World

June 22, 2011
By ossiecastro5 PLATINUM, A Single Light In, New Jersey
ossiecastro5 PLATINUM, A Single Light In, New Jersey
39 articles 9 photos 68 comments

Favorite Quote:
I'm not saying anything, I'm just saying.


The day you had left me,
you didn't even see.
The tears that fell to the ground.
You didn't hear the sound
of my heart breaking,
of my heart shaking.
Why did you have to go.

Hello world, you are gone tomorrow.
You left me in such pain and sorrow.
Hello world, these will be my last days.
Why did we go our separate ways!

No point to go on, without your love.
It is valuable like the stars above.
You were all that I need.
I just cannot proceed.
You were the world to me.
So now I must say.

Hello world, you are gone tomorrow.
You left me in such pain and sorrow.
Hello world, these will be my last days.
Why did we go our separate ways!

What did I do wrong?
Why didn't you stay long?
You don't know how I feel.
My love for you was real.
You were the whole world to me.
So now I must say.

Hello world, you are gone tomorrow.
You left me in such pain and sorrow.
Hello world, these will be my last days.
Why did we go our separate ways!

Hello world, you are gone tomorrow.
You left me in such pain and sorrow.
Hello world, these will be my last days.
Why did we go our separate ways!


The author's comments:
This is one of the few songs I made here. They are all made in the freestyle music genre.

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on Feb. 19 2013 at 10:59 am
NaomiPikalek GOLD, Millwaukee, Wisconsin
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I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. It succeeded in bringing out a lot of emotions in side of me… you are a very talented writer. :D  

on Apr. 4 2012 at 7:48 pm
LittleSully GOLD, Elmwood Park, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The course of true love never did love smooth." William Shakespeare

Amazing! Keep up the good work

on Jan. 30 2012 at 8:23 pm
starbucks_queen21 BRONZE, Belmont, New Hampshire
3 articles 0 photos 39 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Strength is nothing more than how well you hide the pain!"

wow! This is really really good! I wish I could write half as good as this! :)

on Oct. 6 2011 at 7:20 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
1 article 0 photos 1985 comments

Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

Well I  dont know how to imagine freestyle, but I hear a nice tune. Good job! its deep

on Sep. 26 2011 at 4:32 pm
Internal-Love PLATINUM, Queens, New York
33 articles 3 photos 311 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing's black or white, its all just a shade of gray---

















TI "Live your Life" ft Rihanna

Now when you say "hello world!!!!" on 20,000 posts, it will have a whole new meaning when I see it :o

leafy said...
on Jul. 25 2011 at 7:03 pm
leafy, City, Other
0 articles 0 photos 682 comments

Favorite Quote:
Gil: I would like you to read my novel and get your opinion. 
Ernest Hemingway: I hate it. 
Gil: You haven't even read it yet. 
Ernest Hemingway: If it's bad, I'll hate it. If it's good, then I'll be envious and hate it even more. You don't want the opinion of another writer. 

ok, i love this poem. not only is it well-written, but i truly can connect with it, its like, kinda scary. keep up the nice work!


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