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The day you had left me,
you didn't even see.
The tears that fell to the ground.
You didn't hear the sound
of my heart breaking,
of my heart shaking.
Why did you have to go.

Hello world, you are gone tomorrow.
You left me in such pain and sorrow.
Hello world, these will be my last days.
Why did we go our separate ways!

No point to go on, without your love.
It is valuable like the stars above.
You were all that I need.
I just cannot proceed.
You were the world to me.
So now I must say.

Hello world, you are gone tomorrow.
You left me in such pain and sorrow.
Hello world, these will be my last days.
Why did we go our separate ways!

What did I do wrong?
Why didn't you stay long?
You don't know how I feel.
My love for you was real.
You were the whole world to me.
So now I must say.

Hello world, you are gone tomorrow.
You left me in such pain and sorrow.
Hello world, these will be my last days.
Why did we go our separate ways!

Hello world, you are gone tomorrow.
You left me in such pain and sorrow.
Hello world, these will be my last days.
Why did we go our separate ways!





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NaomiPikalek said...
Feb. 19, 2013 at 10:59 am
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. It succeeded in bringing out a lot of emotions in side of me… you are a very talented writer. :D  
 
LittleSully said...
Apr. 4, 2012 at 7:48 pm
Amazing! Keep up the good work
 
iwillbeRISINGfromthegroundThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 6, 2011 at 7:20 pm
Well I  dont know how to imagine freestyle, but I hear a nice tune. Good job! its deep
 
TheDinoWithMeds said...
Sept. 26, 2011 at 4:32 pm
Now when you say "hello world!!!!" on 20,000 posts, it will have a whole new meaning when I see it :o
 
leafyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 25, 2011 at 7:03 pm
ok, i love this poem. not only is it well-written, but i truly can connect with it, its like, kinda scary. keep up the nice work!
 
starbucks_queen21 replied...
Jan. 30, 2012 at 8:23 pm
wow! This is really really good! I wish I could write half as good as this! :)
 
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