Watch Me Bleed.

July 12, 2011
By AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
12 articles 25 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”


You said you loved me.

Now I know it all was a lie.

Bet you didnt see,
all the love I had for you inside me-

It can't be fixed now,
so please don't even try too apologise!

Please watch me bleed, know you caused this pain.
But you can't even see what its like for me on the inside.

You may have lies but I can't live my life without you.

Now I take this knife, too end my life!-

Just remember,
you did this too me

Ill be back for you one day,
To gain revenge,
But untill then!.

Please watch me bleed,
Know you caused this pain,
But you can't even see,
What its like for me on the inside!


The author's comments:
Its a poem, that I did turn into a song! Please Comment! I know its a little depressing but I liked that way it sounded together! Enjoy! :D

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on Mar. 4 2012 at 11:50 am
AllysonMarie GOLD, Gardner, Massachusetts
12 articles 25 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Only an Aunt can give hugs like a mother, can keep secrets like a sister, and share love like a friend.”

Thanks! ^.^ And, I wasnt too sure wether too call this a poem or song! haha

- Ally


on Jul. 15 2011 at 9:04 pm
HaleyDRog. GOLD, Easley, South Carolina
11 articles 14 photos 291 comments

Favorite Quote:
In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life. It goes on. -Robert Frost

I liked it but your spelling was a little off. Other than that it was truly great!

on Jul. 15 2011 at 12:43 pm
NinjaGirl BRONZE, Valley City, North Dakota
1 article 0 photos 202 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only thing holding us back in life is our desire to stay where we are and not venture further.
~Some random person on the Internet :P

Your 'too's should be 'to.' It flowed nicely and wasn't TOO depressing, in my opinion :P Maybe since it's shorter than most songs, you could add a few verses to make ot longer.


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