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Watch Me Bleed.

You said you loved me.

Now I know it all was a lie.

Bet you didnt see,
all the love I had for you inside me-

It can't be fixed now,
so please don't even try too apologise!

Please watch me bleed, know you caused this pain.
But you can't even see what its like for me on the inside.

You may have lies but I can't live my life without you.

Now I take this knife, too end my life!-

Just remember,
you did this too me

Ill be back for you one day,
To gain revenge,
But untill then!.

Please watch me bleed,
Know you caused this pain,
But you can't even see,
What its like for me on the inside!





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AllysonMarie said...
Mar. 4, 2012 at 11:50 am

Thanks! ^.^ And, I wasnt too sure wether too call this a poem or song! haha

- Ally

 
NinjaGirl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 12:43 pm
Your 'too's should be 'to.' It flowed nicely and wasn't TOO depressing, in my opinion :P Maybe since it's shorter than most songs, you could add a few verses to make ot longer.
 
HaleyDRog. replied...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 9:04 pm
I liked it but your spelling was a little off. Other than that it was truly great!
 
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