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No one in this world knows his end
Going like blind on a strange road
Expects his destiny to blow a sudden explode
Optimism at its very best
Induced in every innocent heart
Fooling them from their very start
But I think the world goes by the same trend
Landing many people with their unknown end
I am running behind answers that I never got
I m trying to solve this destiny’s plot
I may end up winning or may be not
But I m trying too hard to make my destiny my friend
As it’s about my unknown end

Its all in your mind too you see

i loved the way i used to be
when i cried with happiness full of glee
those were my childhood day and nights
an age where i used to roam in the streets, left and rights
looked and thought clearly
my mind so clean and fear free
but the time is changing furiously
and i m thinking curiously
I am the one whose identity is changed keeping the name same.
from what i was in the childhood to now what i became
The attitude is changed with world’s game
burning in this question’s flame……

I am running behind answers that I never got
I m trying to solve this destiny’s plot
I may end up winning or may be not
But I m trying too hard to defend
As it’s about my unknown end

i m thinking curiously
the people are same but soul has changed
over the years their goal has changed
they laugh at thoughts they used to keep
the aims which were unfulfilled
the dreams , all they collected in a heap
but inside .......... you know... they weep
they cry for what's not under their control
so they keep adjusting and reinventing their goals
flowing with the flow
bowing their heads down to
destinies written above.

My past stings
so hope only lies in what our future brings
wounds are becoming deeper as the time passes by
I have to catch my hopes before my chances vanish and fly.

and I m thinking curiously……..
I wonder what my future gonna be
The Question has many answers
Depends which one you wanna choose
But to choose u got to have the guts and moves
Would I be able to develop that strength I need
To see my future become a tree from a seed
I can’t see my dreams flow out from my veins
I can,t see them bleed
Its about dreams
and it seems
too hard to ,make them come true
still I think their I a hope
an still there are tensions to cope
and I m thinking curiously………..
I just wanna be the one whose screams are meant to be heard
and dreams come true word by word

I am running behind answers that I never got
I m trying to solve this destiny’s plot
I may end up winning or may be not
But I m trying too hard to defend
As it’s about my unknown end..................
......... ...........





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Shmelmo said...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 7:16 am
Loved it!! I can definitely relate to. You are an amazing poet. Please keep writing!
 
G. said...
Feb. 5, 2012 at 6:22 pm
I loved this poem so much B. I read it for my oral interpratation time where we read something for the class and everyone loved, especially me. You are a fantastic writer, and your work has a lot of soul and heart to it. Not to mention you are one of the few guys I know that actually likes writing poetry.
 
B-Artistic replied...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 3:34 am
I can not express my thanks in word for what you've given me by reciting this poem in the class..I never thought that this poem will be loved this much... I thank you from the bottom of my heart for loving this poem and making others listen this... I also would want to know that are you a member of teenink..or do i know you..coz in ur comment ,it seemed that we've talked before...hope u reply... -)
 
Angelgirl39 replied...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 9:33 am
Its me, Angelgirl... haha, we have talked before. Anyways, you are very welcome for reading it for my class. My computer wont let me log in, so Im on my nook right now.
 
B-Artistic replied...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 8:58 pm
OMG.......... where hv u been angel.. ,looking forward for a healthy chat...be back soon in the cbox
 
Angelgirl39 replied...
Feb. 6, 2012 at 9:22 pm
I will be on cbox for the rest of the week (after school of course, haha) anyways ive been looking for u everywhere! Be on sometime too!
 
SamanthaFaulkner This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 1:43 am
I quite enjoyed reading this for the soul fact that I'm caught exactly where this poem is, not knowing the end or even how to get there. I love the line "I just wanna be the one whose screams are meant to be heard and dreams come true word by word." I can truly relate to that line. Great job!
 
B-Artistic replied...
Jan. 25, 2012 at 2:24 am
thanks a lot..... its gr8 to see that u can relate to this poem....that means a lot to me...thanx again..
 
Silver2blackThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 21, 2012 at 12:14 am
I really like this questionable poem, "No one in this world knows his end" Every line made me want to read more, and wow you're a great poet !
 
B-Artistic replied...
Jan. 22, 2012 at 5:07 am
thanks for your appreciating words.... i do not deserve the respect you gave me by calling me a 'Poet'. I'm very grateful for that.. thanx...
 
josika said...
Jan. 16, 2012 at 3:28 am
hey! amazing piece. i really love the way it flows and also its depth. 5/5 from me. good job!
 
SaintJamesHallow This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 6, 2011 at 3:30 am
Great start, great poem, I think you'll go far. Never stop writing and never restrict yourself. Let it all flow :)
 
B-Artistic replied...
Jul. 6, 2011 at 3:33 am
Thanks :-)
 
TanazMasabaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 5, 2011 at 11:22 pm
hey this is so good! great job there! Do you mind reading my poem Winter Nights? It's right before your one
 
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