June 14, 2011
By jessburns1894 SILVER, Islip, New York
jessburns1894 SILVER, Islip, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Love yesterday with no regrets live today as ur last
and dream tomrrow

You stand there and you murmur you evil words
You never spoke of her like that before
You think we don’t hear you
You think that we don’t know that it is us that you murmur about
We know what you say we know what you mean
We are not foolish
Foolish like you
Hurtful like you
You should know better
You should know not to murmur those evil things
Since you’re the mature one
You’re suppose to know what’s wrong and what’s right
But clearly you don’t know
Don’t know right from wrong
From cruel and fair
From being mature and in mature
So you stand there go ahead just stand there and you murmur your evil words
I’ll be strong and move on to a better stronger place.
I don’t need you
I’m better than you
So good-bye…

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on Jul. 4 2011 at 7:55 pm
sweetdollsarah BRONZE, Hemet, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Love me or Hate me it's still an obsession." --I don't know who wrote or said this quote got it off a friends school book and it stuck with me. "Pickles!" --I just say this all the time!! "It's not that I'm afraid to die, I just don't want to be there when it happens." -- Woody Allen

It was okay. I think that some of your lyricks don't feel finished, like you could use stronger words r add more depth to them. It also seems to end dramaticly sometimes and leap into a brand new topic. Good job so far!!

on Jul. 3 2011 at 2:35 pm
thankfate SILVER, HELLO WISCONSIN!!!, Wisconsin
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It's pretty good! It kind of drags though. Sometimes it gets really good, and others it gets amateur-ish. Keep writing!


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