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The Song He Sang

June 9, 2011
By PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
"Stay golden"
- Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)


The golden light dances from the sky
As your silver sigh leaves impressions on my mind
As your frozen breath escapes your lips
Mine are sealed tight
(2nd time): *

The sinking sun has a lovely glow
Like your lips our footprints in the snow
Start far apart, but in the end so close
I’ll have you know this was better than I hoped


You can’t forget him

But you’re not sure he’d remember your name

Don’t cry, don’t cry little girl

It’s well known that this world’s not sane

A dying star shot through the sky
All the other stars lost their luster that night
I held on tight, but it died so quickly
It burned so bright, but it will never repeat for me

*What’s inside I can’t deny so I better not try…
You never lose, you never lose
You never lose, you never lose
Somebody who never lost you

And every song, and every song
And every right note, and every wrong
Is a love note, keep holding on


The author's comments:
Don't cry, little girl

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on Aug. 5 2011 at 2:51 am
Love.Hate.Passion., Spring Valley, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
~Hope. Faith. Love~
~Be proud of who you are.You are all unique in a different way.~
~I WILL NOT fade into oblivion , and become less than
a distant memory.~

This was so lovely. I enjoyed it thouroughly. Your rhyming is well done , and you have no visible spelling errors. What a great poem/ song !

on Aug. 5 2011 at 12:51 am
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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Favorite Quote:
" Life is never easy for those who dream."
There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

u have a way with words graet work

on Aug. 1 2011 at 9:27 pm
PaigeStreet PLATINUM, Juneau, Alaska
47 articles 0 photos 218 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Stay golden"
- Johnny (The Outsiders, S. E. Hinton)

thanks     :)

Kai17 GOLD said...
on Jul. 29 2011 at 12:30 pm
Kai17 GOLD, Spokane, Washington
17 articles 5 photos 340 comments

Favorite Quote:
*beepbeep*
"Where to, Miss?"
"To the stars."

This was so awesome! I love the words that were used, and how you used them. 6/5.


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