WILD ROSE

May 28, 2011
By poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
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Wild rose,
Sit by my window.?Why do you leave so soon?
Why can’t you stay, here for ever?
Peeping through my window.


Why do you leave me wild rose?
I don’t like to say goodbye.
Why do you leave me wild rose?
Why do you make me cry?


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on Nov. 30 2011 at 2:46 am
RoselieaOak SILVER, Antioch, California
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"Nothing is impossible with God."

Beautiful!

on Nov. 26 2011 at 5:01 pm
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
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eARTh

that would be cool! I didn't really think of what genre it would be sung to.

on Nov. 26 2011 at 4:06 pm
Helena_Noel BRONZE, Burnt Hills, New York
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“I'd rather see a sermon than hear one any day; I'd rather one should walk with me than merely tell the way: The eye's a better pupil and more willing than the ear, fine counsel is confusing, but example's always clear.” -Edgar Guest

Pretty good! I like this, out of curiosity, if this were to be sung, what would the genre be? Don't be offened, but it seems to have the same kinda sweet kinda sad vibe of some folk music I like to listen to.

on Jul. 29 2011 at 2:07 pm
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
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eARTh

Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!

on Jul. 29 2011 at 1:10 pm
ohheyyyelli SILVER, Woonsocket, Rhode Island
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This is so sad/pretty, perfect! Short poems like this are nice[:

on Jul. 17 2011 at 9:29 pm
TheHangingGirl BRONZE, Winter Haven, Florida
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"Poets utter great and wise things that they themselves can not comprehend."

:) I agree with them. Very pretty.

kat2.0 SILVER said...
on Jul. 17 2011 at 12:07 pm
kat2.0 SILVER, Sparrowbush, New York
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life is short so go for it

Great poem it's short but it's great

on Jul. 15 2011 at 6:51 am
emanmkhan SILVER, Austin, Texas
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\"People will forget what you said. People will forget what you did. But people will never forget how you made them feel.\" Maya Angelou

Such a short, yet touching poem. You make the meaning ring loud and clear about loneliness. Nice job! And I love the title by the way :)


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