WILD ROSE

May 28, 2011
Wild rose,
Sit by my window.?Why do you leave so soon?
Why can’t you stay, here for ever?
Peeping through my window.


Why do you leave me wild rose?
I don’t like to say goodbye.
Why do you leave me wild rose?
Why do you make me cry?





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RoselieaOak said...
Nov. 30, 2011 at 2:46 am
Beautiful!
 
LoudDreamer said...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 4:06 pm
Pretty good! I like this, out of curiosity, if this were to be sung, what would the genre be? Don't be offened, but it seems to have the same kinda sweet kinda sad vibe of some folk music I like to listen to.
 
samiasaskia24 replied...
Nov. 26, 2011 at 5:01 pm
that would be cool! I didn't really think of what genre it would be sung to.
 
ohheyyyelli said...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 1:10 pm
This is so sad/pretty, perfect! Short poems like this are nice[:
 
samiasaskia24 replied...
Jul. 29, 2011 at 2:07 pm
Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
hanging_girl_666 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 9:29 pm
:) I agree with them. Very pretty.
 
kat2.0 said...
Jul. 17, 2011 at 12:07 pm
Great poem it's short but it's great
 
emanmkhan said...
Jul. 15, 2011 at 6:51 am
Such a short, yet touching poem. You make the meaning ring loud and clear about loneliness. Nice job! And I love the title by the way :)
 
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