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Stand in the Rain

May 27, 2011
By Delta365 BRONZE, Chadwick, Missouri
Delta365 BRONZE, Chadwick, Missouri
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Now stand in the rain,
Remember why you’re feeling this pain.
What brought me down?
I cannot cry,
So let this rain come down my eyes.

They say that ignorance is bliss,
But lo and behold.
What I found in my sight.

Now down on the ground.
Tears have found their way to my eyes.
The lighting strikes,
And the thunder cries with me.

I cry not for me,
But one loved so sweetly.
Why am I here?

She’s out there now,
All alone,
Needing someones hand to hold.

Now run through the rain,
I’m coming don’t you fear.
You’ll get through,
Because I know you’re strong.

But if you fall down, I’ll be there.
To lend my hand.
Don’t worry now,
I’m here for you.

And we’ll stand in the rain,
Forgetting our pain.

The author's comments:
Just thought this up because a fried was going through something, and i really did stand in the rain.

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on Jul. 21 2011 at 10:40 pm
nikkigonefishin GOLD, Los Angeles, California
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This is amazing! I loved how you wrote this for a friend and used the rain to create a melancholic setting, not to mention that I like the rain:) Keep writing you're pretty talented.

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