One Last Question

May 16, 2011
By rockstar97 BRONZE, Grand Juntion, Michigan
rockstar97 BRONZE, Grand Juntion, Michigan
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I watched you kiss her at your car
And the tears began to fall
I loved you with all my heart
But you just let me fall
So before you go
Answer my last question

Who do you think you are leaving me in the rain
Who do you think you are making me feel this pain

You left me in the dark
You ripped my heart apart
You left me alone
With nothing i can call my own
Answer my last question
Why are u acting like I'm unknown
Answer my last question and you can go and I'll leave you alone

Who do you think you are leaving me in the rain
Who do you think you are putting me through this pain
Who do you think you are
What do you have to gain

I spent so long trying to find out why you left me and went to her
Why you slipped through my fingers so fast before i could caught you and all the rest is now just a blur
But all i could figure out is that i loved you with all my heart but you found someone new
So you broke my heart in two
And created an unhappy ending
But now i realize i don't need you
Its only blue sky from here and out so
Good bye.............
Good bye................
Good bye ............
Good bye.....
Good bye


The author's comments:
I wrote this when I was 12.It's a song that I can play with my guitar! Hope you all enjoy it!

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AliLinnS GOLD said...
on Sep. 18 2011 at 4:53 pm
AliLinnS GOLD, Heislerville, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"I love you, sweet Kate. And I'm truly sorry about this. I do feel...everything." -Casanova
Kiss The Girls by James Patterson

Great job, Honey! I can relate so much! You have such a way with words!

Ahhni PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 3 2011 at 6:16 pm
Ahhni PLATINUM, Battle Creek, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Your naked body should only belong to those who fall in love with your naked soul."
- Charlie Chaplin

Yess of course, youre welcome.(:

on Aug. 31 2011 at 12:39 am
rockstar97 BRONZE, Grand Juntion, Michigan
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Thanks!! well i guess its just kinda always been a hobbie of mine! but thanks! 

Ahhni PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 21 2011 at 9:02 pm
Ahhni PLATINUM, Battle Creek, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Your naked body should only belong to those who fall in love with your naked soul."
- Charlie Chaplin

Of course, you're welcome(: && that's so amazing that you write both songs and poems.  Awesome I love that.

on Jun. 20 2011 at 8:28 pm
rockstar97 BRONZE, Grand Juntion, Michigan
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well thank you very much!! its actually a song that i made into a poem!! and i try to make all my songs and poems true and make them so people can relate to them!!! i can even play all my songs and poems on my guitar! anyways glad u enjoyed it!

Ahhni PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 18 2011 at 7:23 pm
Ahhni PLATINUM, Battle Creek, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Your naked body should only belong to those who fall in love with your naked soul."
- Charlie Chaplin

I loved this, it was very fluent.  I actually had chills throughout the entire poem.  I can relate a lot to the feelings and emotion put into it.




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