You(not a copy of Switchfoot)

April 4, 2011
By Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant
Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall
Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me


Im fighting for a freedom that i cant find
Im searching for a soul that i cant see
But im finally seeing
Whats inside of me

Theres a darkness in my heart
A void in my mind
Its been there since you left
Its what you left behind

But im not gonna back down right now, No
Im not gonna give up on myself, no
Till i know where it all went to
And why the only thing on my mind is you

When standing in the courtyard
And you showed me your love
Why cant everyday be like that
Why do i have to hurt

Theres a darkness in my heart
A void in my mind
Its been there for a while
Its what you left behind

But im not gonna back down right now, No
Im not gonna give up on myself, no
Till i know where it all went to
And why the only thing on my mind is you

So i lie awake everynight
Thinking your are by my side
I wish someone would just pinch me
And tell me that your not here

And you never will be anymore!

Theres a darkness in my heart
A void in my mind
Its been there for a while
Its what you left behind

But im not gonna back down right now, No
Im not gonna give up on myself, no
Till i know where it all went to
And why the only thing on my mind is you! You! You!

The author's comments:
I hope you like it....umm....nothing inspired me to write this....i just kinda wrote it. I hope you understand the meaning of it.

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Hannabug GOLD said...
on Aug. 21 2012 at 8:27 pm
Hannabug GOLD, Winona, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Don't only practice your art, but force your way into its secrets, for it and knowledge can raise men to the Divine." Ludwig van Beethoven

AMAZINGNESS!!!!

mizzfrance said...
on Nov. 28 2011 at 2:48 pm
mizzfrance, Nottelling, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"Only put off until tomorow what you are willing to die having left undone."

this is amazing (: please email me (: i want some advice. how do your words sound so magical ? 15 and single (:

on Sep. 16 2011 at 5:34 pm
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant
Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall
Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me

Thanks! im glad you liked them. I have a new one coming out in a little while. it's called the girl. i hope you read it

Jessica said...
on Sep. 15 2011 at 2:54 pm

Hi!

I love all of your poems, especially this one- keep up the amazing work! Never stop writing! :)


on Aug. 26 2011 at 4:34 pm
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant
Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall
Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me

And she wasnt THAT great anyways haha :P

on Aug. 26 2011 at 4:32 pm
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant
Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall
Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me

Ohh dont worry it's been a while since i wrote this one and all that happened. Im not one to stay down for a while. We were given a life to live it, not to stay depressed all the time

ManaMay GOLD said...
on Aug. 25 2011 at 4:51 pm
ManaMay GOLD, Port Huron, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
** We are heroes with a thousand faces**
*I swim for brighter days despite the absence of sun*

Well you have alot of talent & I'm sorry, things will get better with time sounds easier said then done but I really believe that & you should too :) 

on Aug. 25 2011 at 3:49 pm
Mr.Indescribable SILVER, Cerro Gordo, North Carolina
6 articles 0 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
Hard work beats talent when talent doesnt work hard-Kevin Durant
Pressure Makes Diamonds-Kendall Marshall
Jumping to conclusions just makes the fall a lot harder-Me

Thanks. I had just broke up with my girlfriend so i thought i'd write a song about it.

ManaMay GOLD said...
on Aug. 23 2011 at 5:32 pm
ManaMay GOLD, Port Huron, Michigan
11 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
** We are heroes with a thousand faces**
*I swim for brighter days despite the absence of sun*

I really like this poem you can really feel the heart ache youre explaining. It's really heart felt. i like it. :) 




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