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You can turn a tear
from my eye
into a smile.
You can turn
words with no hope
into a dream worth fighting for.
You give me joy
when I feel that
the happiness is gone.

CHORUS
You come and brighten up my day
You say what you have to say
As soon as every word you speak,
the shape of a smile appears on my lips.
You're a shinning star,
don't stop being who you are.
Please brighten up my day
todayy.

I need that joke
that only you can tell
I need that moment
of having fun,
only with you I can spend
I need your shinning light
to make my darkness disappear.
I need your happy music
so my sad song I can't hear.

(CHORUS:
You come and brighten up my day
You say what you have to say
As soon as every word you speak,
the shape of a smile appears on my lips.
You're a shinning star,
don't stop being who you are.
Please brighten up my day
todayy.



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JustAnotherOwl said...
Jun. 2, 2011 at 2:04 pm:
I like this one best! I read a bunch of them and this one (and the others, as well) is really great! (: Keep writings songs, because you are really good at it! Maybe this is just me, but I feel like sometimes things repeat a little, or sound a little redundant (not as much with this one, but the others...). Anyway, maybe just work on that and you're golden (:
 
Camii replied...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 9:41 pm :
thanks so much!!!(: and thank you for the advice, i'll keep it in mind!
 
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TanGem This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 8:50 pm:
Aww, how sweet! Out of all your works, my favorite. Nicely done, captain. :)
 
Camii replied...
May 28, 2011 at 2:32 pm :
thank you!!! :D
 
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TwinDemons said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 6:23 pm:
Your really good with song writing. Do you sing also? This is my favriote from you. Good job!!!!
 
Camii replied...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 6:30 pm :
thankss:) kind of haha
 
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