Brighten up my day

February 24, 2011
By Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments

You can turn a tear
from my eye
into a smile.
You can turn
words with no hope
into a dream worth fighting for.
You give me joy
when I feel that
the happiness is gone.

CHORUS
You come and brighten up my day
You say what you have to say
As soon as every word you speak,
the shape of a smile appears on my lips.
You're a shinning star,
don't stop being who you are.
Please brighten up my day
todayy.

I need that joke
that only you can tell
I need that moment
of having fun,
only with you I can spend
I need your shinning light
to make my darkness disappear.
I need your happy music
so my sad song I can't hear.

(CHORUS:
You come and brighten up my day
You say what you have to say
As soon as every word you speak,
the shape of a smile appears on my lips.
You're a shinning star,
don't stop being who you are.
Please brighten up my day
todayy.


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Camii GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 9:41 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thanks so much!!!(: and thank you for the advice, i'll keep it in mind!

on Jun. 2 2011 at 2:04 pm
JustAnotherOwl SILVER, Unknown, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"See, we don't really care who you are;
Everyone is capable of looking up and wishing on a star.
So catch it, so contagious, this day-dreamer's disease,
And hope can be your sword, slaying darkness with belief."

"Sanctuary"- Paradise Fears

I like this one best! I read a bunch of them and this one (and the others, as well) is really great! (: Keep writings songs, because you are really good at it! Maybe this is just me, but I feel like sometimes things repeat a little, or sound a little redundant (not as much with this one, but the others...). Anyway, maybe just work on that and you're golden (:

Camii GOLD said...
on May. 28 2011 at 2:32 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thank you!!! :D

on Apr. 1 2011 at 8:50 pm
TanGem PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
34 articles 0 photos 74 comments

Favorite Quote:
Love is not a feeling; it is a gift, an act, an ultimate sacrifice. -Me (Em)

Aww, how sweet! Out of all your works, my favorite. Nicely done, captain. :)

Camii GOLD said...
on Apr. 1 2011 at 6:30 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thankss:) kind of haha

on Apr. 1 2011 at 6:23 pm
LittleMidnight PLATINUM, Glendale, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Life is but a book just waiting to be filled, you make your own story

Your really good with song writing. Do you sing also? This is my favriote from you. Good job!!!!


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