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I'll give you my heart, my soul, it's true.
All these tears separate me from you.
The sound of your voice splits my heart in two.
My brain tries to blur out your face, still I hear your sweet voice and it makes me want say, "Will you be my girl? If not for eternity, then...maybe...the prom?"



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Camii said...
Mar. 17, 2011 at 4:32 pm:

it is really good! i liked it :D i just think the ending should have rhymed with some word to make it better, any way well done!

could you please rate or comment my poems?:)

 
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