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The first time I saw you
walking into the room
I felt something like
love at first sight
I wasn't sure what was it
I thought it'd go away
but it grew stronger
and stronger every day

And now I can't stop feeling
what I felt from the first moment
I met you
I can't help myself
This feeling I've never felt before
just won't go away
I carry it in my heart
wherever I go
and now I can't stop myself.

It goes on
It doesn't stop
The days pass by
I keep missing your smile
I feel so lost
and confused
but I know
that what I want is you

And now I can't stop feeling
what I felt from the first moment
I met you
I can't help myself
This feeling I've never felt before
just won't go away
I carry it in my heart
wherever I go
and now I can't stop myself.



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EthanCalhoun said...
Feb. 7, 2012 at 9:27 pm:
great poem , i know how yu feel :)
 
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SamiLou said...
Jun. 1, 2011 at 6:26 pm:
I feel like this is like coming out of my heart, it just flows so beautifully
 
Camii replied...
Jun. 1, 2011 at 6:29 pm :
thank you!! :D
 
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TanGem This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 8:52 pm:

This writes like a fairytale. I honestly don't agree with the message that we are not able to control ourselves when we're in love. I think good love is always controlled and careful love, because only that can last forever.

But overall, excellent work.

 
Camii replied...
Jun. 1, 2011 at 6:29 pm :
thanks!!:)         
 
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poetofdarkness said...
Mar. 21, 2011 at 11:45 am:
wow that is sensational
 
Camii replied...
Mar. 25, 2011 at 4:12 pm :
thanks!                    
 
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jclsjb said...
Mar. 19, 2011 at 10:29 pm:
WOW! I can't pick out any part that was better than the next! This was such an awesome write!
 
Camii replied...
Mar. 25, 2011 at 4:14 pm :
thank youu !!! :)
 
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HaleyDRog. said...
Mar. 18, 2011 at 9:07 pm:
This is such a great piece. A lot of people can relate to it and it really is good!
 
Camii replied...
Mar. 25, 2011 at 4:16 pm :
i'm glad you liked it!(:
 
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_butters_ said...
Mar. 13, 2011 at 4:00 pm:

awe I really like this one. It's a song right? I'd love to hear the melody for this one too!!! jeezers it's not fair that you can't hear the song *pouts*

 

anyway. I love it. Keep at it, you've got tallent girl.

 
Camii replied...
Mar. 25, 2011 at 4:12 pm :
thanks so much for your comment :D
 
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HighOnEverythingButLove said...
Mar. 13, 2011 at 2:34 pm:
its very relatable
 
Camii replied...
Mar. 25, 2011 at 4:16 pm :
thanks                                        
 
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lilmartz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 13, 2011 at 12:28 pm:
Typical, but cute. I liked the lines, "I felt something like love at first sight I wasn't sure what was it I thought it'd go away." That part was really true. Nice work :)
 
Camii replied...
Mar. 25, 2011 at 4:17 pm :
thank youu :D
 
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