I will miss you

February 24, 2011
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I don't wanna say goodbye
It's hard to start again
It's a new step in my life
I hope I'll be ok
and I'll always remember
you helped me make it through
when I was new at school
You're a very good friend,
you were with me 'til the end
We spent so many times together
and when I felt down you made me feel better

I will miss you so much
'cause you have touched
my soul
But I'll have to go
I'll never forget you
You know that this is true
I will miss you

Even with the distance
you won't be far away
'cause my heart is next to yours
and our memories will never fade
They keep us together
'cause I will remember
every time
I spent with you
You'll be in my mind
all day through


I'll never meet
anybody as you
You're so unique
I hope you'll miss me too
I'm so glad I met you
I'll never forget you
You'll always take a part
in my heart
We'll have to be apart
but you'll always be
inside of me
like a beam of light
that makes my darkest nights
turn into sunny days

I will miss you so much
'cause you're such a
great friend
I'll never let you down
I will remember you
and you know that I'll do
I will miss you

Promise me we'll keep in touch
'cause I will miss you so much..

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yandahLibGirl said...
Mar. 2, 2012 at 12:17 pm

this is VERY GOOD! i enjoy reading it!!!!! GREAT WORK!


EthanCalhoun said...
Feb. 7, 2012 at 9:28 pm
everything yu write is great , i realy enjoy reading your writing
RayBaytheDinosaur said...
Oct. 18, 2011 at 9:55 pm
I'm having a hard time figuring out what it'll sound like to music but I love the idea its really sweet and sad
TanGem This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 8:53 pm
I'm giving every single one of your poems a five-star rating. ;)
Camii replied...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 9:42 pm
thank you!(:
radio_song said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 8:43 pm
awww you write really pretty stuff ^^ i liked the 2nd verse very much, the whole thing was really deep n sweet
Camii replied...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 9:42 pm
thankss! :)
TwinDemons said...
Apr. 1, 2011 at 7:00 pm
Wonderful, amazing, bravo!!!!! I really loved it keep it up!!!
Camii replied...
Jun. 3, 2011 at 9:42 pm
thank you!!(:
DaughterofEvil said...
Mar. 16, 2011 at 7:18 pm
Wow...the loss/emotion you felt was clearly shown in this song.....5/5 BRAVO! If I could, I'd throw you a bouquet of flowers!
Camii replied...
Mar. 25, 2011 at 4:17 pm
thanks! your coment means a lot to me:)
WritingLoverForever said...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 3:50 pm
Aww, so heartfelt and sad. I love this. I can tell you put a lot of thought and emotion into this. Perfection. You're a great writer. :) Could you check out my song, "The You I Thought I Knew"? Thanks, and keep writing!
Camii replied...
Mar. 14, 2011 at 4:14 pm
thanks! i rated and commented on your song (:
_butters_ said...
Mar. 13, 2011 at 3:57 pm

awe!! you're such a good friend I'm jealous haha


Anyway, I loved it :) it could use a little touch up and smooth out the edges but I love it. I bet with the melody it would sound amazing!

Camii replied...
Mar. 25, 2011 at 4:18 pm
thankss! and i'll keep it in mind!
lilmartz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 13, 2011 at 12:25 pm
This is good! I think you overuse some of the rhymes and lines though. It's okay to switch it up and also experiment with other types of rhyming words. It started to sound really cliche. This was a really sweet message though, but didn't seem to really go skin deep. It just stayed at face value. Since this was based on a real experience, I feel you should maybe throw in some inside jokes, or briefly mention a good moment the two of you shared. Just work on making it more unique overall. Nice work :)
Camii replied...
Mar. 13, 2011 at 1:17 pm
thanks for the advice!(:
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