I will miss you

February 24, 2011
By Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments

I don't wanna say goodbye
It's hard to start again
It's a new step in my life
I hope I'll be ok
and I'll always remember
you helped me make it through
when I was new at school
You're a very good friend,
you were with me 'til the end
We spent so many times together
and when I felt down you made me feel better

CHORUS:
I will miss you so much
'cause you have touched
my soul
But I'll have to go
I'll never forget you
You know that this is true
I will miss you

Even with the distance
you won't be far away
'cause my heart is next to yours
and our memories will never fade
They keep us together
'cause I will remember
every time
I spent with you
You'll be in my mind
all day through

(REPEAT CHORUS)

I'll never meet
anybody as you
You're so unique
I hope you'll miss me too
I'm so glad I met you
I'll never forget you
You'll always take a part
in my heart
We'll have to be apart
but you'll always be
inside of me
like a beam of light
that makes my darkest nights
turn into sunny days

CHORUS:
I will miss you so much
'cause you're such a
great friend
I'll never let you down
I will remember you
and you know that I'll do
I will miss you

Promise me we'll keep in touch
'cause I will miss you so much..

The author's comments:
I wrote this to my friends when I moved to another country.

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on Mar. 2 2012 at 12:17 pm

this is VERY GOOD! i enjoy reading it!!!!! GREAT WORK!

 


on Feb. 7 2012 at 9:28 pm
EthanCalhoun PLATINUM, Fairview, New Jersey
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everything yu write is great , i realy enjoy reading your writing

on Oct. 18 2011 at 9:55 pm
RayBaytheDinosaur GOLD, Hampton, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder

I'm having a hard time figuring out what it'll sound like to music but I love the idea its really sweet and sad

Camii GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 9:42 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
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thank you!(:

Camii GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 9:42 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thankss! :)

Camii GOLD said...
on Jun. 3 2011 at 9:42 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thank you!!(:

on Apr. 1 2011 at 8:53 pm
TanGem PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Love is not a feeling; it is a gift, an act, an ultimate sacrifice. -Me (Em)

I'm giving every single one of your poems a five-star rating. ;)

on Apr. 1 2011 at 8:43 pm
HeatherBee BRONZE, I Live In, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Go on and try to tear me down. I will be rising from the ground, like a skyscraper

Love is louder than the pressure to be perfect

awww you write really pretty stuff ^^ i liked the 2nd verse very much, the whole thing was really deep n sweet

on Apr. 1 2011 at 7:00 pm
LittleMidnight PLATINUM, Glendale, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
Life is but a book just waiting to be filled, you make your own story

Wonderful, amazing, bravo!!!!! I really loved it keep it up!!!

Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2011 at 4:18 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
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thankss! and i'll keep it in mind!

Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 25 2011 at 4:17 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thanks! your coment means a lot to me:)

on Mar. 16 2011 at 7:18 pm
Wow...the loss/emotion you felt was clearly shown in this song.....5/5 BRAVO! If I could, I'd throw you a bouquet of flowers!

Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 14 2011 at 4:14 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
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thanks! i rated and commented on your song (:

on Mar. 14 2011 at 3:50 pm
WritingLoverForever PLATINUM, Bowling Green, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
It's not about success; it's about significance.

No one can make you feel inferior without your consent.

Aww, so heartfelt and sad. I love this. I can tell you put a lot of thought and emotion into this. Perfection. You're a great writer. :) Could you check out my song, "The You I Thought I Knew"? Thanks, and keep writing!

on Mar. 13 2011 at 3:57 pm
_butters_ SILVER, Trinidad, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
Your life is an occassion, rise to it.
~Mr. Edward Magorium

awe!! you're such a good friend I'm jealous haha

 

Anyway, I loved it :) it could use a little touch up and smooth out the edges but I love it. I bet with the melody it would sound amazing!


Camii GOLD said...
on Mar. 13 2011 at 1:17 pm
Camii GOLD, Miami, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 75 comments
thanks for the advice!(:

on Mar. 13 2011 at 12:25 pm
lilmartz PLATINUM, Perrysburg, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
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This is good! I think you overuse some of the rhymes and lines though. It's okay to switch it up and also experiment with other types of rhyming words. It started to sound really cliche. This was a really sweet message though, but didn't seem to really go skin deep. It just stayed at face value. Since this was based on a real experience, I feel you should maybe throw in some inside jokes, or briefly mention a good moment the two of you shared. Just work on making it more unique overall. Nice work :)




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