Promise Me

January 9, 2011
By findmeinyourheart7 GOLD, Pomona, New York
findmeinyourheart7 GOLD, Pomona, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Be a rainbow in someone else's cloud. - Maya Angelou.


promise me that when we leave this town behind
you'll leave these lies, and torn up lives
and start brand new

promise me you'll take your time
on finding love and making rhymes
before you rush in

promise me you won't look back
cause as a matter of fact
I'm ready if you are

Let's take these wasted years
and throw them out to sea
forget our sins and remember that
We don't need to be
anything other than what we've been trying to be
focus on dreams wake up to reality
Promise me Promise me

Promise me we'll still be friends
growing old, making amends
Remembering this night
Please Promise me.

The author's comments:
I feel like this could be song lyrics because of the melancholy tone of it.
It's bittersweet.

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on Feb. 14 2011 at 11:38 am
findmeinyourheart7 GOLD, Pomona, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Be a rainbow in someone else's cloud. - Maya Angelou.

wow, aw thanks for the feedback. :)

on Feb. 14 2011 at 8:13 am
tiffgeexo-xo GOLD, Grand Forks, North Dakota
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Favorite Quote:
The only person who can destroy you is yourself.

I like this a lot.

it definitely could be a song(: keep working at it!



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