January 19, 2011
What is my life,
But what the Lord created,
Sometimes full of strife,
Seemingly unanticipated,

Flying down a winding road,
Not knowing what’s around the next bend,
Carrying a heavy load,
Knowing the next turn could be the end,

But the Lord has a disposition,
He's freed me from my addictions,
I may not have His intuition,
But He's lifted my afflictions,

Heaven is my ultimatum,
By Him I have been saved,
And so I will praise him,
For by sin I am no longer enslaved.

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lilmartz This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 31, 2011 at 9:33 am
I like this! I think more lines could definitely be added to it, but what you have here is really good. My favorite was the part about being "seemingly unanticipated." Good job :)
jesusfreak43235 replied...
Feb. 4, 2011 at 1:36 pm
thanks! :) that means alot. and i'll think about making it longer.
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