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Ode to Seven

I want to paint my face a different shade of red
'Cause this magenta color doesn't fit my eyes
I wish I could stop acting like a maniac
'Cause it seems to push people away

Why doesn't anyone love me for who I really am?
I wish somebody would love me like I have always loved them
(I've always loved you)

This here flower is a lovely shade of blue
Do you love it like I love you?



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Dominicano_Loco said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 8:19 am:
This could be a great song. add the right type of music, add a chorus and another verse or 2 and this'd be a song i'd love to hear. :) great job.
 
.o0OPieIsAwkwardO0o. replied...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 9:13 am :

Thanks!

There's actually a video, Seven's music is playing i the background while I sing. It's really very crappy, but if you wanna take a look at it, here's the link;

/watch?v=mmq4_O3kpq0

(Just put you tube dot c om before it)

 
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Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 4:20 pm:
i really like this and i can definately see this as a really good song with the rigt music. i especially  like the last two lines "this here flower is a lovely shade of blue Do you love it like i love you?" i love it!! great job!!
 
...PieIsAwkward, replied...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 4:39 pm :

Thank ya very much!^^

Sometimes when I write songs, which isn't actually too often, I add a random last line about colors...I don't know why I do that, though *shruggie*

 
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DaughterofEvil said...
Feb. 21, 2011 at 7:05 pm:

Pie, this work is very good. I've never actually written song lyrics before. The message was very clear and lovely. Anyways,

5/5

 
..PieIsAwkward.. replied...
Feb. 21, 2011 at 7:09 pm :
Thanks mucho grande, O Daughter of Evil!^^
 
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-Insert_Evil_Laugh-This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 6:34 pm:
I'm a-liking it. Short but sweet; very nice, yeah?
 
..PieIsAwkward.. replied...
Feb. 17, 2011 at 6:00 pm :
Thanks, EvilLaugh, I like to keep my poems kind of short, it seems people don't really wanna read three pages of rhymes :P
 
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_Mags_ said...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 6:26 pm:
I like it, it seems differernt from other poems in the same catagory, which is a good thing. Hope Seven liked what you wrote as much as everyone else does.
 
..PieIsAwkward.. replied...
Feb. 17, 2011 at 6:00 pm :

Thanks! ^^

I think he liked it. I kind of did it as a surprise, of course when I sung it to him, it was pretty craptastic. I have a horrible singing voice :P

 
_Mags_ replied...
Feb. 17, 2011 at 6:04 pm :

Don't worry, I sound like a dieing pig when I sing. Though unlike the pig I don't make bacon for breakfast the next day.

Btw- do you mind checking out the first chapter of my story called Kingdom Come? I posted it as a novel to, though it hasn't been aproved yet. Luckily the 1st chapter was already posted.

 
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Authorgal98 said...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 5:49 pm:
Really love it!!! Great job, Seven should be proud!
 
Authorgal98 replied...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 5:50 pm :
Ooh, and your form IL, too!!!! Just got better! hahaha go corn ^.^
 
..PieIsAwkward.. replied...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 5:53 pm :

Thanks! ^^

What part of Illinois are you from?

 
Authorgal98 replied...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 6:48 pm :
No problem! And I'm form a small town, Frankfort. It's right by Joliet, New Lennox, Mokena,.. ever heard of those places?
 
..PieIsAwkward.. replied...
Feb. 17, 2011 at 5:58 pm :
I don't think I have, sorry. I live more in the Southern part of IL, near St. Louis and junk ^^
 
Authorgal98 replied...
Feb. 19, 2011 at 12:15 pm :
Ooooh haha yeha I live 45 minutes from Chicago
 
..PieIsAwkward.. replied...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 7:00 pm :
Ah, Chicago is fun. I've only been ther eonce, though, takes like an entire day to drive up there :P
 
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Dark_Mind said...
Feb. 5, 2011 at 9:43 pm:
:D rated: 5
 
PieIsAwkward replied...
Feb. 7, 2011 at 4:48 pm :

Haha, that little smiley cracks me up :D

Thanks for reading :]

 
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