Ode to Seven

January 18, 2011
By xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"stap it, rahn"


I want to paint my face a different shade of red
'Cause this magenta color doesn't fit my eyes
I wish I could stop acting like a maniac
'Cause it seems to push people away

Why doesn't anyone love me for who I really am?
I wish somebody would love me like I have always loved them
(I've always loved you)

This here flower is a lovely shade of blue
Do you love it like I love you?


The author's comments:
So my friend, Seven, makes music, and I wrote some lyrics to go with one of his songs. So I decided I would post it here...

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on Apr. 6 2011 at 9:13 am
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"stap it, rahn"

Thanks!

There's actually a video, Seven's music is playing i the background while I sing. It's really very crappy, but if you wanna take a look at it, here's the link;

/watch?v=mmq4_O3kpq0

(Just put you tube dot c om before it)


on Apr. 6 2011 at 8:19 am
Dominicano_Loco PLATINUM, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Live and learn, and when ya fall, Stand Strong and come back!"/"I'm goin to regrett this 1 tomorrow."

This could be a great song. add the right type of music, add a chorus and another verse or 2 and this'd be a song i'd love to hear. :) great job.

on Feb. 25 2011 at 4:39 pm
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
4 articles 0 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
"stap it, rahn"

Thank ya very much!^^

Sometimes when I write songs, which isn't actually too often, I add a random last line about colors...I don't know why I do that, though *shruggie*


on Feb. 25 2011 at 4:20 pm
Hazel-daisy GOLD, --, Other
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Favorite Quote:
It takes a lot of courage to show your dreams to someone else - Erna Bombeck

In three words i can sum up everything I've learned in life: it goes on -Robert Frost

Live, Love, Laugh - ______

Hope, Love, breathe <3 - Me

i really like this and i can definately see this as a really good song with the rigt music. i especially  like the last two lines "this here flower is a lovely shade of blue Do you love it like i love you?" i love it!! great job!!

on Feb. 21 2011 at 7:09 pm
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"stap it, rahn"

Thanks mucho grande, O Daughter of Evil!^^

on Feb. 21 2011 at 7:05 pm

Pie, this work is very good. I've never actually written song lyrics before. The message was very clear and lovely. Anyways,

5/5


on Feb. 20 2011 at 7:00 pm
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"stap it, rahn"

Ah, Chicago is fun. I've only been ther eonce, though, takes like an entire day to drive up there :P

on Feb. 19 2011 at 12:15 pm
Authorgal98 GOLD, Frankort, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Let your mind sart a journey through a strange new world..."

Ooooh haha yeha I live 45 minutes from Chicago

_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Feb. 17 2011 at 6:04 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

Don't worry, I sound like a dieing pig when I sing. Though unlike the pig I don't make bacon for breakfast the next day.

Btw- do you mind checking out the first chapter of my story called Kingdom Come? I posted it as a novel to, though it hasn't been aproved yet. Luckily the 1st chapter was already posted.


on Feb. 17 2011 at 6:00 pm
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"stap it, rahn"

Thanks, EvilLaugh, I like to keep my poems kind of short, it seems people don't really wanna read three pages of rhymes :P

on Feb. 17 2011 at 6:00 pm
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
4 articles 0 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
"stap it, rahn"

Thanks! ^^

I think he liked it. I kind of did it as a surprise, of course when I sung it to him, it was pretty craptastic. I have a horrible singing voice :P


on Feb. 17 2011 at 5:58 pm
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"stap it, rahn"

I don't think I have, sorry. I live more in the Southern part of IL, near St. Louis and junk ^^

on Feb. 16 2011 at 6:48 pm
Authorgal98 GOLD, Frankort, Illinois
17 articles 0 photos 195 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let your mind sart a journey through a strange new world..."

No problem! And I'm form a small town, Frankfort. It's right by Joliet, New Lennox, Mokena,.. ever heard of those places?

on Feb. 16 2011 at 6:34 pm
Origami_Ferret SILVER, Virginia Beach, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Let's go."
"We can't."
"Why not?"
"We're waiting for Godot."
--------------------------------
"Get thee to a nunnery!"

I'm a-liking it. Short but sweet; very nice, yeah?

_Mags_ SILVER said...
on Feb. 16 2011 at 6:26 pm
_Mags_ SILVER, Somewhere, North Carolina
9 articles 7 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
- I stare danger in the face and giggle
- Never argue with an idiot, people might not know the difference
-R.A.P (Retards Attempting Poetry)
-Tip Cologne ryhmes with alone

I like it, it seems differernt from other poems in the same catagory, which is a good thing. Hope Seven liked what you wrote as much as everyone else does.

on Feb. 16 2011 at 5:53 pm
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
4 articles 0 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
"stap it, rahn"

Thanks! ^^

What part of Illinois are you from?


on Feb. 16 2011 at 5:50 pm
Authorgal98 GOLD, Frankort, Illinois
17 articles 0 photos 195 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let your mind sart a journey through a strange new world..."

Ooh, and your form IL, too!!!! Just got better! hahaha go corn ^.^

on Feb. 16 2011 at 5:49 pm
Authorgal98 GOLD, Frankort, Illinois
17 articles 0 photos 195 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Let your mind sart a journey through a strange new world..."

Really love it!!! Great job, Seven should be proud!

on Feb. 7 2011 at 4:48 pm
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
4 articles 0 photos 84 comments

Favorite Quote:
"stap it, rahn"

Haha, that little smiley cracks me up :D

Thanks for reading :]


on Feb. 7 2011 at 4:47 pm
xx..PieIsAwkward..xx BRONZE, Godfrey, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"stap it, rahn"

Thanks so much! :]


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