Ode to Seven

January 18, 2011
I want to paint my face a different shade of red
'Cause this magenta color doesn't fit my eyes
I wish I could stop acting like a maniac
'Cause it seems to push people away

Why doesn't anyone love me for who I really am?
I wish somebody would love me like I have always loved them
(I've always loved you)

This here flower is a lovely shade of blue
Do you love it like I love you?

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Dominicano_Loco said...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 8:19 am
This could be a great song. add the right type of music, add a chorus and another verse or 2 and this'd be a song i'd love to hear. :) great job.
.o0OPieIsAwkwardO0o. replied...
Apr. 6, 2011 at 9:13 am


There's actually a video, Seven's music is playing i the background while I sing. It's really very crappy, but if you wanna take a look at it, here's the link;


(Just put you tube dot c om before it)

Hazel-daisy This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 4:20 pm
i really like this and i can definately see this as a really good song with the rigt music. i especially  like the last two lines "this here flower is a lovely shade of blue Do you love it like i love you?" i love it!! great job!!
...PieIsAwkward, replied...
Feb. 25, 2011 at 4:39 pm

Thank ya very much!^^

Sometimes when I write songs, which isn't actually too often, I add a random last line about colors...I don't know why I do that, though *shruggie*

DaughterofEvil said...
Feb. 21, 2011 at 7:05 pm

Pie, this work is very good. I've never actually written song lyrics before. The message was very clear and lovely. Anyways,


..PieIsAwkward.. replied...
Feb. 21, 2011 at 7:09 pm
Thanks mucho grande, O Daughter of Evil!^^
-Insert_Evil_Laugh- said...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 6:34 pm
I'm a-liking it. Short but sweet; very nice, yeah?
..PieIsAwkward.. replied...
Feb. 17, 2011 at 6:00 pm
Thanks, EvilLaugh, I like to keep my poems kind of short, it seems people don't really wanna read three pages of rhymes :P
_Mags_ said...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 6:26 pm
I like it, it seems differernt from other poems in the same catagory, which is a good thing. Hope Seven liked what you wrote as much as everyone else does.
..PieIsAwkward.. replied...
Feb. 17, 2011 at 6:00 pm

Thanks! ^^

I think he liked it. I kind of did it as a surprise, of course when I sung it to him, it was pretty craptastic. I have a horrible singing voice :P

_Mags_ replied...
Feb. 17, 2011 at 6:04 pm

Don't worry, I sound like a dieing pig when I sing. Though unlike the pig I don't make bacon for breakfast the next day.

Btw- do you mind checking out the first chapter of my story called Kingdom Come? I posted it as a novel to, though it hasn't been aproved yet. Luckily the 1st chapter was already posted.

Authorgal98 said...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 5:49 pm
Really love it!!! Great job, Seven should be proud!
Authorgal98 replied...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 5:50 pm
Ooh, and your form IL, too!!!! Just got better! hahaha go corn ^.^
..PieIsAwkward.. replied...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 5:53 pm

Thanks! ^^

What part of Illinois are you from?

Authorgal98 replied...
Feb. 16, 2011 at 6:48 pm
No problem! And I'm form a small town, Frankfort. It's right by Joliet, New Lennox, Mokena,.. ever heard of those places?
..PieIsAwkward.. replied...
Feb. 17, 2011 at 5:58 pm
I don't think I have, sorry. I live more in the Southern part of IL, near St. Louis and junk ^^
Authorgal98 replied...
Feb. 19, 2011 at 12:15 pm
Ooooh haha yeha I live 45 minutes from Chicago
..PieIsAwkward.. replied...
Feb. 20, 2011 at 7:00 pm
Ah, Chicago is fun. I've only been ther eonce, though, takes like an entire day to drive up there :P
Dark_Mind said...
Feb. 5, 2011 at 9:43 pm
:D rated: 5
PieIsAwkward replied...
Feb. 7, 2011 at 4:48 pm

Haha, that little smiley cracks me up :D

Thanks for reading :]

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